Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response is not an answer to the examiner’s question; it repeats the question and has grammar mistakes. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no and a reason), then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Also correct singular/plural and word order (e.g., "taking pictures of different views").

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places I visit. For example, when I travel I photograph landscapes and street scenes, and later I organize them in albums to compare how places change.

提案: You repeated the question instead of giving your preference. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with specific details and a linking word (e.g., "because" or "however"). Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

例: I prefer views in rural areas because I like open spaces and natural scenery. However, I also enjoy urban views at night when the city lights create interesting compositions.

提案: Again, you repeated the question and made grammar errors. Answer directly by stating a preference or saying you like both, then support with a reason and a short example. Use correct phrases like "views in my own country" or "views in other countries."

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes I haven't seen before. For instance, I found coastal scenery abroad more varied than at home, so traveling helps me discover new photographic subjects.

× Do you like taking picture of different?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

This sentence has a singular/plural issue and a missing noun: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when speaking generally, matching 'taking pictures of ...'. Also the object is incomplete: 'different' needs a noun such as 'views'. Add 'views' to complete the phrase. Suggested improvement: use 'pictures' for general activities and include the object (e.g., 'views').

× Do you prefer in urban areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer urban areas or rural areas?

This sentence incorrectly uses the preposition 'in' after 'prefer'. The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the noun phrase without 'in' when offering a choice: 'prefer urban areas or rural areas'. Suggestion: remove the unnecessary preposition to make the sentence natural.

× Do you prefer view in your own country and other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Problems: 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally (singular/plural issue). The conjunction 'and' is incorrect for offering a choice; 'or' should be used. Also include the preposition 'in' before each location to be parallel and clear. Suggestion: use plural 'views', use 'or' for alternatives, and keep parallel structure ('in your own country or in other countries').