Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ข้อเสนอแนะ: ปรับไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ใช้ให้ถูกต้องและเป็นธรรมชาติ ใช้ประโยคเริ่มต้นที่ชัดเจน ตอบตรงคำถามแล้วเสริมรายละเอียดเฉพาะเจาะจง (เช่น ประเภทของวิวหรือเหตุผล) และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้องหรือสะกดผิด เช่น “wheels” ควรเป็น “views” และแก้ tense/รูปกริยาให้ถูกต้อง

例: Yes, I do. When I travel abroad, I always take photos of different views, especially natural scenery and historic architecture in other countries.

提案: ข้อเสนอแนะ: ควรตอบตรงคำถามด้วยประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยเหตุผลที่ชัดเจนและเฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม (เช่น ‘rural areas’, ‘peaceful’, ‘nature’) แก้คำผิดและประโยคที่ไม่เป็นธรรมชาติ รวมทั้งเชื่อมประโยคด้วยคำเชื่อมง่ายๆ เช่น ‘because’, ‘so’, ‘which’

例: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and full of nature. For example, seeing trees, small shops and open sky helps me relax after work and makes me feel refreshed.

提案: ข้อเสนอแนะ: ตอบให้ชัดเจนและให้เหตุผลเฉพาะ เช่น ความหลากหลายของสถาปัตยกรรมหรือวัฒนธรรม แก้ไวยากรณ์ (plural/singular, verb forms) และเชื่อมความคิดด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น ‘because’, ‘and’ หรือ ‘so that’ เพิ่มตัวอย่างหรือความทรงจำสั้นๆ เพื่อให้คำตอบน่าสนใจ

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different styles of architecture and landscapes I don't see at home. Looking at those photos reminds me of exciting travel memories and new cultural experiences.

× Yes, for me when I'm travelling at abroad, I always taking picture of different wheels, especially the natural scenery and some heritage architecture in other countries.

✓ Yes. For me, when I'm travelling abroad, I always take pictures of different views, especially natural scenery and heritage architecture in other countries.

Preposition 'at abroad' is incorrect; use 'abroad'. Verb form 'always taking' should be simple present 'always take' for habitual action. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to agree with 'always take'. 'Wheels' is incorrect word choice for 'views'; use 'views'. Also remove unnecessary articles before uncountable/abstract plural nouns (use 'natural scenery' without 'the'). Suggestions: use 'abroad' alone, use simple present for habits, pluralize countable nouns, choose correct vocabulary.

× For me, I prefer wheels in rural areas because of when I saw some pizza with the trees, merchants and sky.

✓ For me, I prefer views in rural areas because I like seeing trees, small shops and open skies.

Incorrect use of 'because of when' and wrong prepositions/phrasing. 'Because of when I saw' is ungrammatical; use 'because' or 'because I like'. 'Pizza' and 'merchants' are wrong word choices; likely intended 'people/shops' or 'vendors'. 'With the trees, merchants and sky' should be rephrased to 'seeing trees, small shops and open skies'. Suggestions: use 'because' + clause for reasons, choose appropriate nouns, and maintain parallel structure.

× It reduced my spread from working hours and I have motivation from the three and lead you some.

✓ It helps me relax from working hours and gives me motivation from the place and scenery.

Tense and phrasing errors: 'It reduced my spread from working hours' mixes past tense 'reduced' with intended general effect; use present 'helps me relax'. 'Spread' is wrong word choice; use 'relax' or 'break'. 'I have motivation from the three and lead you some' is unclear and ungrammatical; likely 'gives me motivation from the place and scenery'. Suggestions: use present tense for general truths, pick correct vocabulary ('relax', 'place', 'scenery'), and form clear subject-verb-object clauses.

× Absolutely, I prefer wheels in other country because it difference will form my country.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer views in other countries because the differences help shape my perspective of my country.

Preposition and number errors: 'in other country' should be 'in other countries'. 'Wheels' is wrong word choice — use 'views'. The clause 'it difference will form my country' is ungrammatical; use 'the differences help shape my perspective' or 'the differences influence my view of my country'. Suggestions: pluralize 'countries', use 'views', and rephrase awkward clauses into subject-verb structures.

× And then when I saw some picture I realized some memory in abroad and the exciting moment when I traveled.

✓ And then, when I saw some pictures, I recalled memories of being abroad and the exciting moments from my travels.

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