Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Jawabanmu hanya mengulangi pertanyaan penguji, jadi tidak memenuhi kriteria respons langsung. Untuk memperbaiki: jawab langsung dengan topik kalimat (mis. "Yes, I do" atau "No, I don't"), lalu beri 1–2 rincian spesifik menggunakan kata penghubung seperti "because" atau "for example". Jaga jawaban tidak lebih dari 3–4 kalimat agar alami dan efektif.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because they capture unique light and atmosphere. For example, I like taking photos of coastal sunsets and busy city streets to compare colors and moods.

提案: Kembali kamu hanya mengulang pertanyaan dengan sedikit perubahan, jadi tidak menjawab. Perbaikan: mulai dengan kalimat topik yang jelas (mis. "I prefer rural areas"), lalu tambahkan alasan spesifik dan contoh menggunakan penghubung seperti "because" atau "for instance". Hindari jawaban berulang dan tetap singkat (2–4 kalimat).

例: I prefer rural areas because they offer peaceful landscapes and natural colors. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling fields and small villages where the light is softer and there are fewer distractions.

提案: Sekali lagi jawabanmu hanya mengulang pertanyaan sehingga tidak menunjukkan kemampuan berbahasa atau memberikan informasi. Saran: jawab langsung (mis. "I prefer views in other countries" atau "I like both"), lalu beri alasan spesifik dan contoh singkat menggunakan kata penghubung seperti "because" atau "for example". Jaga struktur: topik + rincian pendukung.

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer different cultures and landscapes that I haven't seen before. For example, I enjoyed photographing mountain villages in Japan that looked very different from places at home.

× Do you like taking picture of different views?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

The noun 'picture' should be plural because 'taking' here refers to the general activity of making multiple photographs of various views. Use 'pictures' to match the general, countable sense. Suggestion: use plural nouns after verbs like 'take' or 'taking' when referring to multiple or unspecified quantities (e.g., 'taking pictures', 'collecting stamps').

× Do you prefer fields in urban areas or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

The student's answer uses 'fields', which changes the meaning from the examiner's question about 'views'. The error is a word choice mismatch rather than strict grammar, but it also creates a singular/plural and semantic inconsistency. Correction restores the original noun 'views' to match the question. Suggestion: repeat or paraphrase the key noun in the examiner's question to answer accurately (e.g., 'I prefer views in rural areas').

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It matches the examiner's question and uses correct plural 'views' and parallel structure. Suggestion: respond directly (e.g., 'I prefer views in my own country because...').