Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is short and contains an incorrect pronoun (“her”) which makes it unclear. Give a direct topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details (why you like it, what you focus on) and use correct vocabulary. Keep responses natural and within 3–5 sentences. Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like capturing interesting light and shapes in the scene. For example, when I photograph a city I focus on reflections in windows and the contrast between old and new buildings. This helps me tell a visual story about the place.

提案: Your answer is direct but too brief. Expand with a clear topic sentence and at least one supporting reason. Use linking words (e.g., “because”, “so”, “for instance”) and give a specific detail to make your response more informative and natural.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy peaceful landscapes and natural light. For instance, I like photographing rolling hills and quiet country roads early in the morning when the fog creates a soft atmosphere.

提案: This answer is unclear and ungrammatical. The question asks to compare locations (own country vs other countries), but you repeated preference for rural areas without addressing the asked comparison. Start with a direct comparison sentence, give a reason and an example. Use correct grammar (‘I really like…’ or ‘I prefer…’).

例: I usually prefer views in my own country because I know the best local spots and can visit them often. For example, I like photographing coastal villages near my hometown where I grew up and understand the seasonal changes.

× Yes, I like her city photos.

✓ Yes, I like city photos.

The student used the pronoun 'her' incorrectly; there is no referent in the context. Use the noun phrase 'city photos' or a possessive only if a person was previously mentioned (for example, 'her city photos' would be correct if referring to a specific woman). Suggestion: remove 'her' or replace it with a clear referent.

× I like rural.

✓ I like rural areas.

The adjective 'rural' cannot stand alone as a noun here. The question asks about 'urban areas or rural areas', so the noun 'areas' is required. Suggestion: include the noun that 'rural' modifies (e.g., 'rural areas' or 'the countryside').

× I very like rural.

✓ I really like rural areas.

The phrase 'I very like' is ungrammatical in English. 'Like' is not typically modified by 'very'; use adverbs such as 'really' or 'very much' and include the noun 'areas' after 'rural'. Also change 'rural' to 'rural areas' to supply the noun. Suggestion: say 'I really like rural areas' or 'I like rural areas very much.'