Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、条理清晰并直接回应问题。开头用一句主题句表明喜好，然后用一两句具体细节支持（拍摄场景、原因、频率等）。注意语法（时态和人称）和词汇搭配；避免重复冗余，整体不超过5句话。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes and fields because I feel life is short and I want to capture beautiful moments. Sometimes I take photos when I travel or go for walks nearby.

提案: 回答要直接表明偏好并给出具体理由，使用连词连接观点和细节，注意词汇拼写和语法（比如 'urban' 而不是 'amber'，时态一致）。尽量用2–4句说明你喜欢的元素（例如安静、自然、景观类型）。

例: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because I enjoy nature and peace. I dislike the constant noise in cities and prefer views with water, green fields and open skies. These scenes help me relax and feel refreshed.

提案: 回答要简洁明确地表达偏好并提供清晰原因。纠正常见表达错误（例如 'I was born here'而不是 'I'm burnt in the here'，'my own country' 单数），并给出具体原因如文化习惯、家庭因素或熟悉感。使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。

例: I prefer views in my own country because I was born and raised here and my family lives nearby. I'm more familiar with the culture and landscapes, so I feel more comfortable enjoying local scenery than exploring views abroad.

× Yes, I'm already taking picture in my life because I think the life is short.

✓ Yes, I already take pictures in my life because I think life is short.

句子使用現在進行時（I'm taking）不符合意思；此處描述一種習慣或經常性的行為，應使用一般現在時（I take）。同時：picture 要用複數（pictures），life 前不需定冠詞（life 而非 the life）。建議養成區分習慣性動作用一般現在時、正在發生的動作用現在進行時的習慣。

× So maybe in somewhere or sometimes I we're taking pictures in the fields.

✓ So maybe sometimes I take pictures in the fields.

原句中 in somewhere 不正確，應用 somewhere 或 in some places；we're 不合語境且人稱錯誤，應為 I。again，描述習慣用一般現在時（take）。建議：使用 somewhere 或 sometimes，注意人稱和時態一致。

× Umm, I like rural areas more than the amber areas because I like the nature.

✓ Umm, I like rural areas more than urban areas because I like nature.

amber areas 顯然用詞錯誤，應為 urban areas（城市地區）。the nature 不需要定冠詞，直接用 nature 表示自然。建議多背常用地理與環境詞彙，注意定冠詞的使用。

× I didn't like the noise in the city I like anymore.

✓ I don't like the noise in the city anymore.

原句混用過去式（didn't like）和現在情況（anymore），語義是現在仍不喜歡噪音，應使用一般現在時的否定（don't like）並把 anymore 放在句尾。建議清楚表達時間，選擇匹配的時態。

× Like the water, like the greens.

✓ Like the water and the greenery.

greens 作為名詞口語上不自然，應用 greenery 或 green spaces 表示綠色植物。若要列舉多項，用 and 連接更流暢。建議學習常見名詞搭配（collocations）。

× OK, where in the world had many countries and I like trap but I like my own countries more than the other countries because I'm burnt in the here, my parents in the here too and get used to the lifestyle in the my owner countries.

✓ OK, the world has many countries and I like travel, but I like my own country more than other countries because I was born here, my parents are here too, and I'm used to the lifestyle in my country.

原句存在多處結構性錯誤：where in the world had many countries 不合語法，應為 the world has many countries；I like trap 為用詞錯誤，應為 travel 或 traveling；my own countries 應為 my own country（單數）且 other countries 前不需定冠詞 the；I'm burnt in the here 應為 I was born here（被動或完成式表出生）；my parents in the here too 缺謂語，應加 are；get used to the lifestyle in the my owner countries 多餘限定詞，應為 I'm used to the lifestyle in my country。建議：分句清晰，注意主謂結構、人稱時態一致、常用搭配用法，以及單複數和冠詞使用。