Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、精炼并包含主题句和一到两句具体细节。避免重复“like”。可以用连接词丰富逻辑，例如指出拍照的目的和带来的感受。练习时控制在3-4句以内。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I travel a lot and it helps me preserve memories. For example, I often take landscape shots when I visit mountains or beaches to show my family what the place looks like. Taking photos also inspires me to explore new places.

提案: 句子不够连贯且有语法错误。先用主题句直接表态（或说明取决于心情），随后用连接词（however, when）给出两种情境的具体对比，并提供具体例子或原因。避免重复和人称混乱。

例: It depends on my mood: when I'm energetic I prefer urban views, because the city’s architecture and lights are exciting to photograph. However, when I need to relax I choose rural scenes, like quiet fields or rivers, which are more peaceful and photogenic.

提案: 回答有时态、语法和逻辑混乱，且信息重复。用一到两句清楚表达偏好并给出具体原因或例子。注意时态一致，避免冗余。

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new and diverse scenery that I haven't seen before. For instance, I enjoyed photographing historic streets in Europe last year, which felt very different from the landscapes at home.

× Yes, I like taking pictures because I like traveling and I think taking pictures is a great hobby. I can share what I see with my friends and family.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures because I like traveling, and I think taking pictures is a great hobby. I can share what I see with my friends and family.

原句主要是标点和连接词使用不当，句子本身时态正确（现在时）。建议在两个并列的独立分句之间加逗号并用连词“and”连接，以使句子更自然流畅。

× It depends. In my mood, sometimes I want you to see the views in the busy city.

✓ It depends. Depending on my mood, sometimes I want to show you the views in the busy city.

原句使用短语“In my mood”和“I want you to see”不自然。时态应为一般现在时，意为“根据我的心情，有时我想给你看城市的景色”。将“In my mood”改为“Depending on my mood”，并用“show you”替换“want you to see”更符合英语表达习惯。

× But when I wanted to relax by myself, I wanted to go to the countryside to see the views.

✓ But when I want to relax by myself, I want to go to the countryside to see the views.

此处描述习惯或一般情况，应使用一般现在时而不是过去时。原句使用“wanted”两次变成过去时，语境应为现在时的偏好或常态，因此改为“want”。

× I think it's all I think these two areas all have the good views.

✓ I think both these areas have good views.

原句重复“I think”且结构冗长，“all I think these two areas all have the good views”语序和用词不当。简化为“I think both these areas have good views.” 表示两地都有好景色，语法与表达更简洁正确。

× I preferred views in other countries because I want I like to see new views and.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I like to see new scenery.

原句时态混用且结构不完整。应使用一般现在时“prefer”表示偏好，去掉重复的“I want I like to”并将“views and.” 修正为完整短语“new scenery”。此外将“views”后改为不可数的“scenery”更自然。

× I like traveling in my country. I hardly ever travel to everywhere so I see the views so.

✓ I like traveling in my country. I hardly ever travel everywhere, so I don't often see those views.

原句“hardly ever travel to everywhere”搭配错误，应该说“travel everywhere”或“travel to many places”。此外“so I see the views so”不完整且重复“so”。改为“So I don't often see those views”更清楚地表达频率和因果关系，时态保持一般现在时。