Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the reply grammatically correct, concise, and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one linked specific detail. Avoid repetition and unnecessary words. Use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement.

例: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph oceans, mountains and waterfalls because their colors and textures make for striking photos.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and then give one specific reason using linking words. Correct grammar ("I love nature", "they give me peace") and avoid repeating the same word.

例: I prefer rural views because I love nature. For instance, peaceful fields and forests help me relax and make my photos feel more natural and calm.

提案: Respond directly and confidently; avoid asking the examiner a question back. Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail with correct grammar and no repetition. Be specific about why your country’s views appeal to you.

例: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of scenery. For example, I can easily visit nearby coasts, mountains and waterfalls, so I can take many different kinds of landscape photos.

× Yes, I love to taking picture difference views such as ocean, mountains and waterfalls are my favorite things that I love to pick take photos these things.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, such as the ocean, mountains, and waterfalls; these are my favorite subjects to photograph.

The original uses 'to taking' which incorrectly combines 'to' + gerund; after 'love' use the gerund 'taking' or the to-infinitive 'to take'. Also 'picture difference views' has word order and noun number errors: 'different views' and plural 'pictures'. 'Pick take photos these things' is ungrammatical; 'subjects to photograph' or 'things I like to photograph' is correct. Use articles before 'ocean' and maintain parallel list with commas. (Grammar problem type ID:8)

× I think I would prefer rural areas because I love to nature and nature I and nature photos is give me peace.

✓ I think I would prefer rural areas because I love nature, and nature photographs give me peace.

'Love to nature' is incorrect; use verb + noun: 'love nature'. The repeated fragments 'nature I and nature photos' are redundant and ungrammatical. 'Nature photos is give me peace' has subject-verb agreement and wrong verb form; use 'photographs give me peace'. Also remove unnecessary 'would' is acceptable but kept; ensure plural 'photographs' matches 'give'. (Grammar problem type ID:11)

× Are you prefer views on my country? Because in my country I can I can look ocean, mountains, waterfalls.

✓ Do you mean local views in my country? In my country I can see the ocean, mountains, and waterfalls.

The question form 'Are you prefer' is incorrect; use 'Do you prefer' or rephrase. 'On my country' is wrong preposition; use 'in my country'. 'I can I can look ocean' repeats 'I can' and uses 'look' incorrectly; use 'see the ocean'. Add articles 'the' before 'ocean' and parallel list punctuation. (Grammar problem type ID:12)