Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не ясен и грамматически неверен. Студент должен прямо ответить на вопрос, дав одно предложение-тему и затем, при необходимости, одно-два поясняющих предложения. Нужно использовать корректную лексику (например, "take pictures", "posters" — разные вещи) и связки для связности. Также избегать встречных вопросов к экзаменатору в начале; вместо этого можно выразить причину или пример.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. I especially like landscapes because they capture colours and atmosphere; for example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach to show the changing light.

提案: Ответ не соответствует вопросу и бессмысленен. Студент должен прямо указать предпочтение (городские или сельские виды), затем привести конкретную причину и пример, используя связки (for example, because, so). Избегайте неструктурированных фраз и неправильного порядка слов.

例: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more natural. For example, I enjoy photographing fields and forests, which offer peaceful scenes and rich colours that you don't usually find in cities.

提案: Ответ не по теме и содержит непонятные слова. Надо прямо ответить, сравнить виды своей страны и других стран, привести причину и пример. Используйте простые связки (however, because, for instance) и корректную лексику (country, scenery, landscapes).

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different landscapes and cultures. For instance, when I visited Japan I was impressed by the combination of mountains and traditional gardens, which felt very different from the scenery at home.

× Yes. Do you like taking poster?

✓ Yes. Do you like taking posters?

The noun 'poster' is countable and the student likely means taking photos of posters or multiple posters; the plural form 'posters' is required when speaking generally. Use 'a poster' for a single item (Do you like taking a poster?) or 'posters' for general preference (Do you like taking posters?). Suggestion: Use the plural for general activities with countable nouns: 'Do you like taking posters?'

× Mine in the pool for what you prefer with.

✓ I prefer views of pools. What about you?

The original sentence is jumbled and lacks a clear subject-verb structure. 'Mine in the pool for what you prefer with' does not form a grammatical sentence. The corrected version provides a clear subject 'I', verb 'prefer', object 'views of pools', and a follow-up question 'What about you?' to mirror the examiner's question. Suggestion: Organize sentences as Subject + Verb + Object and separate ideas into two sentences when asking a question back: 'I prefer views of pools. What about you?'

× Do you my prefer wives?

✓ Do you prefer views in your country or abroad?

The original sentence 'Do you my prefer wives?' is ungrammatical and possibly a mistaken attempt to echo the examiner's question. It mixes pronouns and unrelated noun 'wives'. The corrected sentence matches the examiner's intended comparison between 'your own country' and 'other countries' using appropriate subjects and verbs. Suggestion: Repeat or rephrase the examiner's question correctly: 'Do you prefer views in your country or abroad?'.