Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and unclear (word 'Fuse' is inappropriate). Give a direct topic sentence and then one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Clarify whether you enjoy taking photos and say why, where, or what types of views you prefer.

例: Yes, I do enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and city skylines because the light and colors change constantly, which makes each photo unique.

提案: The answer does not address the question (it asks to choose urban or rural). Provide a clear choice in the topic sentence, then add a specific reason and one supporting detail with a linking word.

例: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I like open landscapes and natural scenery; for instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and quiet lakes since they feel peaceful and offer interesting compositions.

提案: This response fails to answer which option you prefer. State your preference clearly, then give a reason and an example. Use a linking word to connect your main idea and supporting detail.

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often feature different cultures and architectures; for example, I loved photographing traditional temples and colorful markets when I traveled to Japan last year.

× Fuse, yes.

✓ Yes, I do.

The student's reply 'Fuse, yes.' appears to be a misused or unintended word ('Fuse') and does not correctly answer the question. The expected short answer to 'Do you like taking pictures of different views?' is 'Yes, I do.' This uses the correct subject pronoun 'I' and auxiliary 'do' for a present simple yes/no question. Suggestion: use the subject pronoun and auxiliary verb in short answers (e.g., 'Yes, I do.' or 'No, I don't.').

× Yes, absolutely.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in urban areas.

The question asks 'Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?' A complete answer should indicate the choice and include the subject pronoun if expanded. The student's reply 'Yes, absolutely.' does not specify which option is preferred and uses 'Yes' without matching the binary choice. Correction provides a grammatically complete response with subject 'I' and the verb 'prefer.' Suggestion: state the chosen option and use 'I' + verb (e.g., 'I prefer urban views.' or 'I prefer rural views.').

× Yes.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in my own country.

The question 'Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?' requires specifying which option is preferred. A single-word 'Yes.' is not adequate and lacks the subject and verb to clearly answer. The corrected sentence includes subject 'I' and verb 'prefer' and specifies the option. Suggestion: answer such either/or questions by stating your preference explicitly (e.g., 'I prefer my own country.' or 'I prefer other countries.').