Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、句子更完整，并避免多余重复。先给主题句（喜欢拍不同景色），然后用一两句具体支持细节（什么时候、为什么、感觉），并使用衔接词使语言连贯。注意时态和冠词的使用（e.g. "in the evening"）。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets in the evening because their colors relax me and brighten my mood. I also like capturing city skylines when they’re lit up, as they feel lively and exciting.

提案: 回答要更直接并使用连接词比较两者，同时用更恰当的形容词和短语描述感受。避免不自然的表达（如“living”、“confident”用于景色）。保持一到两句支持细节，并给出具体例子。

例: I like both urban and rural views for different reasons. Urban areas feel vibrant with busy streets and neon lights, while the countryside is peaceful with fresh air and wide open fields, which helps me relax.

提案: 避免无关或不明词汇（如“Apple Slide”），先直截了当回答（例如：I don’t have a strong preference），然后用一两句具体原因和例子说明。注意主谓一致和动词形式（e.g. “every country is special”, “I enjoy taking photographs”）。

例: I don’t have a strong preference between my country and others because each place has special scenery. For instance, my country’s mountain landscapes feel familiar and comforting, while overseas cities offer new architectural styles that inspire me to take different kinds of photos.

× Different views yes I like taking pictures for different views because a beautiful scene can cheer me up in evening I take a photograph for sunsets, can feel calm and.

✓ Different views — yes, I like taking pictures of different scenes because a beautiful scene can cheer me up. In the evening I take photographs of sunsets; they make me feel calm.

句子中多处动词和名词搭配不当：短语“taking pictures for”应为“taking pictures of”，表示“拍……的照片”；“in evening”缺少定冠词，应为“in the evening”；“take a photograph for sunsets”应为“take photographs of sunsets”；句尾的“can feel calm and”结构不完整，需改为完整句子如“they make me feel calm”。建议注意动词+介词固定搭配、冠词使用以及句子完整性。

× I both like urban areas and rural areas. They each have different emotions. Urban areas are living and have more activities, but countryside have more relaxed, fresh and confident.

✓ I like both urban and rural areas. They each give me different feelings. Urban areas are lively and have more activities, but the countryside is more relaxed, fresh, and peaceful.

原句多处句子结构和词性使用错误：‘I both like urban areas and rural areas’词序不自然，应为‘I like both A and B’；‘They each have different emotions’中主语不能‘have emotions’用于地点，改为‘give me different feelings’更自然；‘Urban areas are living’将形容词用错，应为‘lively’；‘but countryside have more relaxed, fresh and confident’中‘countryside’前缺定冠词‘the’，而且谓语与单数主语不一致，应为‘is’；‘confident’描述人，不适合描述乡村，改为‘peaceful’。建议掌握固定搭配‘I like both A and B’、形容词选择与主谓一致。

× Apple Slide, I think every country are special. They have unique scenery and give me different emotions. So I enjoy take photograph for every country. It can make me, it can cheer me up.

✓ Hmm, I think every country is special. They have unique scenery and give me different feelings. So I enjoy taking photographs in every country. They can cheer me up.

句中错误包括：‘every country are special’主谓不一致，‘every country’为单数，需用‘is’（参见主谓一致）；‘enjoy take photograph’动词短语错误，‘enjoy’后应接动名词‘taking photographs’；‘for every country’介词用错，改为‘in every country’更自然；最后句子不完整且代词指代不清，改为复数代词‘They’指代‘photographs’并用完整句。建议注意主谓一致、动词+动名词结构和正确代词指代。