Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but disfluent and contains pauses and repetition. Make a single clear statement first, then add a brief reason or example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid filler sounds. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice small details. For example, I always bring my camera when I travel so I can capture interesting scenes and practice my composition.

提案: Good direct response and reason, but pronunciation and repetition errors reduce clarity. Expand slightly with a specific detail and use a linking word to add coherence. Avoid hesitations and correct basic vocabulary (e.g., 'natural' instead of 'Nat').

例: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy natural landscapes and peaceful scenery. For instance, I like photographing lakes and forests since they offer varied colors and textures that aren’t common in cities.

提案: Your answer gives an opinion but sounds negative and wordy with repetition of 'because'. Be careful with generalizations and provide a balanced, specific reason. Use one clear reason and an example, and correct grammar (e.g., 'there are a lot of old buildings' and 'outdated' needs context).

例: I usually prefer views in other countries because I enjoy modern architecture and different cultural styles. For example, when I traveled abroad I appreciated sleek new skylines and contemporary public spaces that felt fresher than many old buildings back home.

× I. And I always so I always bring my camera when I go to different places.

✓ I always bring my camera when I go to different places.

The original sentence contains fragments and redundant words ('I.', 'so', repeated 'I always'), causing a sentence structure error. Remove the extraneous fragments and duplicates to form one complete sentence with a subject and verb: 'I always bring my camera when I go to different places.' This improves clarity and grammaticality. Suggested improvement: plan your spoken sentence before speaking and avoid filler words and repetitions.

× I prefer rural areas because I really like Nat nature things and I think they are really beautiful.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I really like natural things and I think they are very beautiful.

The word 'Nat' appears to be a typo and 'nature things' is not the correct adjective form; the correct adjective is 'natural.' Also, 'really beautiful' is acceptable but 'very beautiful' is a clearer adverb choice. This error falls under incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs. Suggestion: use the adjective form 'natural' to modify 'things' and choose a single adverb ('very' or 'really') to avoid redundancy.

× I prefer another country because I think our country is not really beautiful because there is lot of old building and is really outdated.

✓ I prefer another country because I think our country is not very beautiful; there are a lot of old buildings and it is really outdated.

Multiple article and agreement errors: 'there is lot of old building' should be 'there are a lot of old buildings' (use plural noun with 'a lot of' and plural verb 'are'). Also 'is really outdated' lacks a clear subject; change to 'it is really outdated.' These are article and subject-verb agreement issues grouped under article errors. Suggestion: use 'a' with 'lot' and pluralize the noun, ensure the verb agrees with plural subjects, and include explicit subject pronouns when needed.