Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更自然、简洁且直接。避免重复（比如多次说“I like taking pictures”），语法错误（时态与数的一致性）和词汇选择（使用landscape重复且不准确）。建议：1）用一句主题句直接回答考官；2）用1–2句具体细节支持（说明为什么、举例）；3）注意时态和单复数；4）使用连接词如“because”或“for example”使语句连贯。

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each country and landscape offers unique scenes and colours. For example, I love capturing mountain ranges at sunrise and colourful street scenes in foreign cities.

提案: 回答应更有条理并纠正语法错误与重复。避免不连贯的短语（如“rural was nature was in nature”“modern urban clothes”）。建议：1）开头直接表明偏好；2）用一两句具体理由支持，并用连接词（because, so）连接；3）用准确的词汇（e.g. countryside, peaceful, fresh air）；4）控制句子数量，不超过5句。

例: I prefer rural views because the countryside is peaceful and full of natural scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing green fields and rivers since they feel relaxing and offer clear, natural colours unlike busy urban streets.

提案: 需要更自然和准确地表达原因，避免词汇和语法错误（如“a young people”“like excited things”）。建议：1）直接回答并给出具体原因；2）用更合适的表达描述对新奇事物的兴趣（e.g. I enjoy exploring new cultures and scenery）；3）用连接词如“because”或“so”使逻辑更清晰；4）举一两个具体例子说明喜欢国外风景的原因。

例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering new cultures and landscapes. For instance, travelling abroad lets me photograph unfamiliar architectures and natural sites, which inspires me and improves my photography skills.

× Yes, I did. Uh, I think in different countries or in different landscape, they have lots of new landscape for me.

✓ Yes, I do. Uh, I think in different countries or different landscapes, there are lots of new scenes for me.

学生用“Yes, I did.”回答当前习惯性喜好时，时态不对，应使用一般现在时“Yes, I do.”；此外句中“in different landscape”应为复数“different landscapes”，因为表示多种风景；“they have lots of new landscape for me”结构不自然且主语不明确，用“There are lots of new scenes for me”更符合英语表达。建议：陈述习惯或喜好时用一般现在时，注意可数名词单复数及存在句（there be）结构。

× It's interesting for me.

✓ It's interesting for me.

该句本身语法正确，但与上下文搭配可以更自然为“It’s interesting to me.” 两者皆可，主要无单复数错误。

× So I like it. I like taking pictures. I like taking pictures.

✓ So I like it. I like taking pictures.

原句重复“I like taking pictures.”一次即可，且喜欢为一般现在时，使用正确。建议避免不必要重复。

× Well, in fact I prefer views in rural areas because I think rural was nature was in nature.

✓ Well, in fact I prefer views in rural areas because I think rural areas are full of nature.

原句“rural was nature was in nature”语序混乱且错误使用连系动词和名词，应改为“rural areas are full of nature”或“rural areas are more natural”。建议理清主语和谓语，使用复数“rural areas”并用“are”作连系动词。

× I like the nature. I want to close to the nature, modern urban clothes.

✓ I like nature. I want to be close to nature, not modern urban clothes.

“the nature”中不需要定冠词，应为“nature”；“close to the nature”应为“be close to nature”；“modern urban clothes”和前句逻辑不通，可能想表达与现代城市生活相反，应改为“not modern urban life”。建议：避免在不可数名词前误用定冠词，注意完整的动词结构（be close to）。

× So I I like it.

✓ So I like it.

句中重复“I”导致语法/打字错误，应删除重复项。动词“like”与主语“I”一致，使用正确。建议写作或口语时注意避免重复。

× I prefer in other countries because I'm a young people.

✓ I prefer other countries because I'm a young person.

动词“prefer”后直接接宾语，不用介词“in”；“people”是复数，若指自己应为单数“person”。建议记住“prefer + 名词/动名词”结构，并区分person/people。

× I like the new things. For me, I like excited things.

✓ I like new things. For me, I like exciting things.

“the new things”可简化为“new things”；“excited things”用词错误，应为“exciting things”表示使人感到兴奋的事物（-ing 形式）。建议区分形容词的-ed与-ing形式：-ed表示感受者，-ing表示使人产生这种感受的事物。

× So I would like to prefer go to the new country to see new landscape and photographing new views.

✓ So I would prefer to go to a new country to see new landscapes and photograph new views.

错误点：不需要同一处同时使用“would like to”与“prefer”；“prefer to do”或“would prefer to do”为正确结构；“go”前需“to”形成不定式；“new landscape”应为复数“new landscapes”；并且并列动词应使用不定式“to go ... and to photograph”或并列动词原形“go ... and photograph”。建议选择单一结构（would prefer to）并注意动词不定式和名词复数形式。