Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос и расширьте ответ детали́ми. Вместо короткого встречного вопроса дайте тему́вую фразу и одну-две дополнительные детали. Используйте связку (for example, because, and) чтобы сделать ответ связным и естественным.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I like capturing natural light and interesting compositions. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines with my phone, and I sometimes edit them to enhance colors.

提案: Говорите ясно и по существу: начинайте с прямого ответа (I prefer... или I like...), затем объясните причину и приведите пример. Избегайте неясных слов и пауз. Используйте связки (because, so, for example) и конкретные описания (hills, fields, architecture).

例: I prefer views in rural areas because I like peaceful landscapes and wide open fields. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and small farms, which feel more relaxing than busy streets.

提案: Начните с чётого утверждения и затем поясните причины с конкретикой. Разделите ответ на две части: почему предпочитаете родные места и почему иногда любите зарубежные. Используйте связки (but, however, also) и конкретные слова (friendly people, familiar places, different cultures).

例: I prefer views in my own country because the people and places feel familiar and welcoming. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries for different scenery and cultural experiences, such as coastal towns with unique architecture.

× I prefer we have a ruler because the open legs carpets uh for explaining to watch hill fields and he'll try it.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they offer open landscapes, hills and fields to look at.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and many unclear words. 'we have a ruler' seems to be a misheard attempt at 'rural'; 'open legs carpets' is incorrect and unclear, likely intended 'open landscapes'; 'he'll try it' is irrelevant. Correct the pronoun/word choice and simplify the structure. Use 'I prefer rural areas because they offer open landscapes, hills and fields to look at.' This fixes pronoun/reference errors and improves clarity and grammar. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I prefer weave in my own country because they are friendly and enough time.

✓ I prefer living in my own country because people are friendly and I have enough time.

'weave' is incorrect; likely meant 'we live' or 'living'. The pronoun 'they' is unclear for referring to people; specify 'people'. Also add subject 'I' for 'have enough time.' The corrected sentence uses the gerund 'living' for preference and clear pronoun reference. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I also enjoy as canoeing abroad for is is nowherely and different.

✓ I also enjoy canoeing abroad because it is novel and different.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: extraneous 'as', repeated 'is', and 'nowherely' is not a word—likely intended 'novel' or 'nowhere' but 'novel' makes sense with 'different.' Use 'because it is novel and different' to explain the reason. This fixes sentence structure and word choice. Grammar problem type ID: 26