Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Clarify the vocabulary and tighten the response. Use the correct word 'views' instead of 'viewers', start with a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and seaside sunsets so that later I can remember where I visited and how I felt. This helps me preserve special memories and share them with my family.

提案: Avoid asking the examiner for definitions. Demonstrate comprehension by answering directly. If unsure, ask a brief clarifying question once, then answer. Give a clear preference and one supporting reason with a linking word. Keep it short and natural.

例: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and more peaceful. For example, I like photographing wide fields and small villages since the scenery feels more relaxing than busy streets.

提案: Provide a clearer, grammatically correct statement and give a specific reason or example. Avoid vague negatives like 'my countries'—use 'my country'. Use one linking phrase to expand your answer naturally.

例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I loved taking photos of Japan’s cherry blossoms last year, which are very different from the scenery back home.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different viewers so that when I grow up, I can actually come back to these pictures and remember everything I did when I was this age.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views so that when I grow up, I can come back to these pictures and remember everything I did when I was that age.

The student used 'viewers' (people who view) instead of 'views' (scenery). Also 'this age' is odd when referring to the past or future perspective; 'that age' is more natural. Suggestion: Use the correct noun 'views' for scenery and use 'that age' when talking about a past/future point of reference. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× What does urban areas and what does rural areas even mean?

✓ What do 'urban areas' and 'rural areas' even mean?

The original uses singular auxiliary 'does' with plural subject 'urban areas' and 'rural areas', causing subject-verb disagreement. Also the structure is awkward; use 'do' for plural and quote the terms for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'do' for plural subjects and reorder to 'What do X and Y mean?'. Grammar problem type ID: 27

× I prefer views in other countries since I don't really like the views in my countries.

✓ I prefer views in other countries since I don't really like the views in my country.

The phrase 'my countries' incorrectly pluralizes 'country' when referring to the speaker's own single country. Use 'my country' for a single nation. If the speaker has multiple countries, say 'my countries' only with context; here 'my country' is appropriate. Suggestion: Use singular 'country' when referring to one's own nation.