Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (singular/plural) and avoid repeating the examiner's question. Keep it within 3–4 short sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset because the colours change dramatically, and I also take photos of mountains when I go hiking to capture the landscape. Because lighting is important, I often go out in the early morning or late afternoon to get the best shots.

提案: Answer directly and politely ask for clarification if you truly don't understand a word, but do not repeat or mispronounce the question. Then state a preference with reasons and a linking word. Use clear vocabulary and one or two supporting details.

例: I'm sorry, could you repeat the question? I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and offer natural scenery like forests and lakes. However, I also enjoy city views for their architecture and lively atmosphere, especially at night.

提案: Respond directly with a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details or examples. Avoid vague statements; explain why you like views from your own country or abroad, using linking words like 'because' or 'however.' Keep grammar and word order correct.

例: I like views both in my own country and in other countries. For instance, my country has beautiful coastal landscapes that feel familiar, but I enjoy visiting other countries to see different architecture and cultural scenery. Because each place is unique, I often try to travel to new regions to broaden my photo collection.

× Do you like taking picture of different views? Yes, I like it.

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views? Yes, I do.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'different views' implies multiple images (singular and plural issue). Also, the short answer should use the auxiliary 'do' for correct subject-verb structure in present simple: 'Yes, I do.' Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and use appropriate short answers with auxiliaries.

× Do you purple bills in urban *** or rural areas? I don't understand.

✓ Do you prefer views in urban or rural areas? I don't understand.

The student sentence contains 'purple bills' which appears to be a misheard/mistyped phrase; the intended verb is 'prefer' and object 'views'. This is an incorrect use/choice of words/pronouns causing confusion (treated as incorrect use of pronouns/word choice). Correcting to 'Do you prefer views in urban or rural areas?' matches the examiner's question. Suggestion: listen for the verb 'prefer' and repeat the key nouns accurately.

× Do you prefer views in or your own country or in others countries? I think all countries of good view.

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries? I think all countries have good views.

Multiple issues: 'others countries' should be 'other countries' (singular/plural adjective form) — treated as singular and plural issue. Also 'of good view' is incorrect collocation; correct is 'have good views.' Change 'Do you prefer views in or your own country' to 'Do you prefer views in your own country' removing the extra 'or'. Suggestion: use 'other' (not 'others') before plurals, and use 'have good views' to express possession of scenery.