Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer directly responds and is natural, but it is slightly repetitive and could be more concise with a clearer topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Use a linking phrase to expand briefly and avoid redundancy (e.g., don’t repeat words like “views” unnecessarily).

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes to preserve my memories. For example, I often capture sunsets and city skylines so I can relive the atmosphere later.

提案: Good direct answer and reason, but there is a repetition error (“gives gives”) and slightly awkward phrasing. Improve by using one clear topic sentence, then add a brief, specific example and a linking word for coherence. Watch for grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid repeating words.

例: I prefer rural views because the countryside is peaceful and less crowded. For example, walking by a quiet lake in the countryside helps me unwind after a busy week.

提案: Clear and specific answer with a good example. To improve, make the topic sentence slightly stronger and smooth the list with a linking phrase. Keep the response within 3–4 sentences and avoid trailing commas before concluding phrases.

例: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse scenery. For example, in Japan I can enjoy rugged coastlines, dramatic mountain ranges and serene traditional gardens, which gives me plenty of photographic opportunities.

× Yes, I like to take a picture of different views because I want to make the memories of those views last.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I want to make the memories of those views last.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by the gerund when referring to general preferences (like + -ing). Also 'a picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'different views' (plural). Use 'taking pictures' for natural collocation and agreement: 'like taking pictures of different views.'

× I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because the countryside is peaceful and less crowded, so views in rural areas gives gives me a sense of relaxation.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because the countryside is peaceful and less crowded, so views in rural areas give me a sense of relaxation.

The subject 'views' is plural, so the verb must be the plural form 'give' (not 'gives'). Also there is a duplicated word 'gives gives' which is a typo. Ensure verb agrees with plural subject: 'views ... give.'

× I like views in both, but I prefer my country's views because it offers a wide variety of scenery. For example, Japan has beautiful coastlines, mountain landscapes, traditional gardens, so I can enjoy them.

✓ I like views in both, but I prefer my country's views because they offer a wide variety of scenery. For example, Japan has beautiful coastlines, mountain landscapes, and traditional gardens, so I can enjoy them.

The noun 'views' is plural, so the following pronoun/verb must agree: use 'they offer' instead of 'it offers.' Also add 'and' in the list to join the final item and improve sentence flow. Ensure plural agreement between subject 'views' and verb/pronoun.