Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 多注意语法和句子结构，使用明确的主题句并添加连词使表达连贯。避免词汇使用错误（如“coaching”应为“capturing”），分成不超过五句，并补充具体细节。建议练习将想法分为一句主句加一到两句支持细节。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because capturing beautiful scenes helps me remember special moments and places. For example, when I travel I take landscape photos to show friends on social media. It is also relaxing and helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss.

提案: 回答需要有清晰的主题句并用连词连接支持理由，避免重复和不完整的句子。纠正拼写和词汇（例如“roots”不适合此处，应为“routes”或“rural views”），并给出具体例子说明你为何偏好城市或乡村。

例: I prefer urban views because I love the vibrant architecture and night lights that make the city feel alive. For example, in Scalia the modern buildings and illuminated streets create great photo opportunities and a lively atmosphere. However, I also appreciate peaceful rural landscapes when I want a quieter experience.

提案: 回答应先给出明确立场，然后用具体原因支持，避免含糊和语法错误。表达要连贯，使用连词（because, so, although）并给出具体例子，如未游览的地点或文化差异。

例: I prefer views in my own country because I am more familiar with the culture and local scenery, which makes me feel comfortable. For example, there are many beautiful coastal towns nearby that I haven't explored yet, and I enjoy discovering their unique traditions and landscapes.

× I love coaching beautiful things when I should taking photos help me to remember special moment and places.

✓ I love capturing beautiful things; taking photos helps me remember special moments and places.

句中出现多个动词形式错误："coaching" 应为表达“拍摄”的动词 "capturing" 或 "taking"；"when I should taking" 结构不正确，应该使用现在分词或主谓结构。此外，主句与从句的时态和主谓不一致："taking photos help" 主语是单数动名词短语 "taking photos"，谓语需要第三人称单数 "helps"；"special moment" 应为复数 "special moments"。建议：使用正确的动词（capture/take），保持主谓一致（动名词短语作为单数主语时动词用第三人称单数），并注意名词单复数。

× I enjoy sharing my picture on social media with friends photographs is a relaxing.

✓ I enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends; photography is relaxing.

原句包含主谓不一致与名词形式问题："my picture" 若泛指多张照片应使用复数 "my pictures"；句尾 "photographs is a relaxing" 结构混乱，若想表达“摄影很放松”应使用不可数名词或抽象名词 "photography"，并搭配单数谓语 "is relaxing"。建议：区分可数名词复数和抽象名词，保证谓语与主语在人称和数上保持一致。

× I love the city of Scalia, especially at night with all the lighting, urban areas having interesting architecture and modern buildings.

✓ I love the city of Scalia, especially at night with all the lights. Urban areas have interesting architecture and modern buildings.

句子中使用了不完整的非谓语结构 "urban areas having..."，应使用完整句子并保持一般现在时态描述习惯事实："Urban areas have..."。另外 "lighting" 在此处更自然用复数名词 "lights" 表示城市的灯光。建议：遇到描述常态或一般事实时使用一般现在时，并使用完整主谓结构。

× I like. I like to. I like roots.

✓ I like them. I like to walk around. I like routes.

原句为断裂的片段，无法表达完整含义："I like." 需要指代对象（如 "them"）；"I like to." 不完整，需加动词不定式的宾语（例如 "walk around"）；"I like roots" 可能为拼写错误或词不达意，若指“路线/路径”应为 "routes"。建议：将短碎句合并为完整句子，确保主语、动词和宾语齐全，并检查拼写以表达清晰意思。

× I'm familiar with sit near here, so feeling the feeling, the communication to it.

✓ I'm familiar with places near here, so I feel comfortable communicating about them.

原句存在代词与名词搭配混乱及结构不完整："familiar with sit near here" 中的 "sit" 用法错误，应为名词短语如 "places"；"feeling the feeling" 冗余，应直接表达情感状态；"the communication to it" 结构不自然，需明确主语与宾语并使用正确介词 "about" 或动词短语 "communicating about them"。建议：使用明确的名词（places/area），用简单句表达感受（I feel comfortable），并用正确代词指代前文（them）。

× There are a lot of beautiful places in country in my country that I haven't explored.

✓ There are many beautiful places in my country that I haven't explored.

句中有重复与用词不当："a lot of" 与 "in country in my country" 冗余且结构错误；更自然的表达是 "There are many beautiful places in my country..."。同时保持一般现在完成时用于表示到目前为止未探索的状态（I haven't explored）。建议：避免重复短语，使用更自然的量词（many）并保持句子简洁。