Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر طبيعية وتنظيمًا. ابدأ بجملة مباشرة توضح موقفك بوضوح، ثم قدم سببًا أو مثالًا قصيرًا. تجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. ركّب جملة كاملة وصحيحة نحويًا (مثلاً: "Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because...").

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me notice small details I would otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and close-ups of interesting textures.

提案: حسّن الربط بين الجملة الأولى والتفاصيل التالية باستخدام رابط يوضّح لماذا تفضّل الطبيعة. أضف جملة أو جملتين تشرح السبب وتصف نوع المشاهد الطبيعية التي تفضلها، مع استخدام كلمات وصفية مناسبة.

例: I prefer rural and natural views because I love open spaces and greenery. For instance, I enjoy mountain landscapes and quiet lakesides where the scenery feels peaceful and varied.

提案: تجنّب الكلمات غير المناسبة والأخطاء في المفردات (مثلاً "refuse" خطأ — استخدم "natural scenery" أو "natural landscapes"). قدّم جملة واضحة تشرح المقارنة وأذكر أمثلة محددة لما يعجبك في مناظر دول أخرى مع ربط منطقي. قلل التردّد واصغِ جمل كاملة وصحيحة.

例: I prefer views in other countries because Saudi Arabia has fewer natural landscapes that I enjoy. For example, I would love to photograph the forests and lakes in Canada and the diverse national parks across the United States.

× Sometimes I would like to take a picture from different angle.

✓ Sometimes I would like to take pictures from different angles.

The noun 'picture' should be plural because the speaker refers to taking photos in general; this is a pluralization issue best addressed by using the plural noun 'pictures' and 'angles'. Also 'from different angle' needs 'different angles' for natural English. Suggestion: use 'pictures' and 'angles' when speaking about multiple instances. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× I live in Saudi Arabia, there is not a lot of uh, natural refuse.

✓ I live in Saudi Arabia; there is not a lot of natural scenery.

The phrase 'a lot of' should be followed by an uncountable noun or a plural countable noun. 'Refuse' means garbage and is countable/uncountable but is not appropriate here. The intended meaning is 'scenery' which is uncountable. Also the original has a comma splice; replace with a semicolon or separate sentence. Suggestion: use 'not a lot of natural scenery' or 'not many natural landscapes.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× So I prefer from different country like Canada, like uh, United States.

✓ So I prefer countries like Canada and the United States.

The structure 'prefer from different country' is incorrect. 'Prefer' should be followed by the object (what is preferred): 'countries like...'. Also use the definite article 'the' with 'United States'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer countries like Canada and the United States.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 11},{