Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题，避免重复和语法错误；在补充细节时用连词组织句子，最多不超过5句。例如说明你拍风景或人像的原因、拍摄风格或常用的拍摄场景。注意时态和冠词的使用。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes when I travel. I usually take wide shots to capture the whole scene so I can remember the place, and I also take portraits of local people to record everyday life. I prefer natural lighting and try to capture candid moments rather than posed photos.

提案: 直接给出偏好后用一到两句具体原因支持，避免重复和语法错误；使用连接词（because, so, for example）使表达更连贯；注意动词时态和名词单复数。

例: I prefer urban views because I grew up in a big city and enjoy the lively atmosphere. For example, riding a bicycle along busy streets and seeing buses and subways around me makes the city feel energetic and exciting.

提案: 回答要具体且合乎逻辑，补充细节时用恰当的词汇表达感受或原因，避免错用词（如“wedding”不合语境）；用连接词（for example, because, which）来组织句子并控制句子数量。

例: I prefer views in other countries because I’m curious about different cultures and want to travel the world. For example, when I visited Malaysia I was fascinated by the traditional costumes and colorful festivals, which made the trip unforgettable.

× Yes, I like take pictures of landscapes while traveling.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of landscapes while traveling.

动词 like 后若表示喜爱某活动，应接动名词（verb + -ing），因此用 taking 而不是不带 -ing 的原形动词。建议：记住 like / enjoy / mind 等常与动名词搭配。

× I like to take a whole shot of the landscape in my eyes to memorize the scene I saw and to and for another souvenir, uh, and also like to take some portraits of people to, to the to to.

✓ I like to take a wide shot of the landscape I see to remember the scene and as a souvenir, and I also like to take some portraits of people.

原句语序混乱且有多余或重复成分（"to and for another souvenir", 多次停顿和重复的 "to"）。使用清晰的从句和并列结构："to take... to remember... and as a souvenir" 表意明确。建议：说话前先在脑中构建完整句子，避免重复与插入词。

× I prefer, I prefer views in urban area.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas.

area 为可数名词，表示类别时需用复数或在前加定冠词，如 "in urban areas" 或 "in the urban area"。建议：表示一般地点类型时多用复数。

× I was grow, I grow up, I grow up in a big city and it was interesting for me to ride bicycles along the busy streets.

✓ I grew up in a big city, and it was interesting for me to ride bicycles along the busy streets.

"grow up" 的过去式是 "grew up"，不能用 "was grow"。原句重复且时态混用。建议：讲过去经历用 past tense（grew up），注意不要重复同一信息。

× Uh, the bus, the subway is mixed up, uh, energy.

✓ Uh, buses and the subway are quite busy and energetic.

原句结构不清且单复数与动词不一致（"the bus, the subway is"），"mixed up, energy" 用词不当。改为复数 "buses" 与复数动词 "are"，并用 "busy and energetic" 表示充满活力。建议：列举多项时，确保主谓一致并使用恰当形容词表达意思。

× I prefer views in other countries. I'm always curious about other countries and my dream is to travel around the world.

✓ I prefer views in other countries. I'm always curious about other countries, and my dream is to travel around the world.

此处主要是标点和连接词问题，原句可加逗号和连词使句子更流畅，时态使用正确（一般现在时谈习惯与永久愿望）。建议：用逗号和连词连接相关分句以提高连贯性。

× For example, on a trip to Malaysia, I was deeply impressed by their local costumes and colorful festivals.

✓ For example, on a trip to Malaysia, I was deeply impressed by the local costumes and colorful festivals.

使用 "their" 指代不明确。应使用定冠词 "the" 指代马来西亚的服饰与节日。时态（过去时）使用正确。建议：说到某国的事物时用 "the + 名词" 更自然，避免不明确的代词。

× It makes me wedding.

✓ It made me feel like getting married. / It made me feel joyous.

"wedding" 是名词，不能直接与 make 用作表语。要表达感受应使用动词短语如 "made me feel..." 或使用形容词。原句时态应与前句过去时一致（made）。建议：注意名词与动词/形容词的搭配，必要时使用动词短语表达情绪。