Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте более естественные фразы и исправьте ошибки лексики и грамматики. Начните с чётного топик‑предложения, затем добавьте одно‑два уточняющих предложения с причинами или примером. Избегайте неясных выражений («nature in the ears») и излишней тавтологии.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing natural scenery. For example, I often photograph sunsets and mountains when I travel, as they create dramatic colours and shapes.

提案: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос без лишнего «Yes» в начале; дайте причину и конкретный пример или сравнение. Используйте связки (because, however, for example) для логичности.

例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the variety of architecture and city life. For example, I like photographing old buildings and busy streets, which show the character of my city.

提案: Отвечайте ясно на выбор между своей страной и другими. Избегайте путаницы и повторов; стройте ответ: утверждение + причина + пример. Исправьте грамматику и порядок слов, используйте связки (because, for example, while).

例: I usually prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with its landscapes and culture. For example, I enjoy photographing local mountains and lakes at different seasons, although I also appreciate beaches and forests when I travel abroad.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because it's beautiful and nature in the ears so amazing.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they are beautiful and the nature here is so amazing.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it's' and 'in the ears' and mixes singular/plural agreement. 'Different views' is plural so use 'they are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Nature in the ears' is likely a typo for 'nature here'; replace with 'the nature here' or simply 'nature here'. Also 'so amazing' modifies 'nature' so structure 'the nature here is so amazing' is correct.

× Yes, I think I prefer views in urban areas because I live in a big city in my country.

✓ Yes, I think I prefer views in urban areas because I live in a big city in my country.

This sentence is already grammatically correct. No change needed. Keep verb forms matching the subject and present tense 'live' fits 'I'. (Included to confirm no correction required.)

× I think I prefer woods in my country and other country because nature is so amazing.

✓ I think I prefer the woods in my country and in other countries because nature is so amazing.

Use definite article 'the woods' when speaking about forested areas in general. Also 'other country' should be plural or preceded by 'another' — here 'other countries' fits better. Maintain plural agreement and parallel structure.

× I like see the mountains or the lakes, rivers and beach.

✓ I like to see the mountains, lakes, rivers, and beaches.

Infinitive 'to see' is required after 'like' when expressing preference in this context. Also list items should be parallel and use plural nouns for general references: 'lakes, rivers, and beaches'. Include commas appropriately for clarity.

× Nature so amazing and I prefer see my own country in other country.

✓ Nature is so amazing and I prefer to see my own country rather than other countries.

Missing verb 'is' after 'Nature' — present simple required. Also 'I prefer to see' needs the infinitive form. The comparative idea is unclear: use 'rather than other countries' to express preference for seeing one's own country over others. Ensure parallel, clear structure.