Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally natural and relevant, but there are a few pronunciation/word-choice slips ("CSD scapes") and some redundancy. Keep replies concise (max 5 sentences) and correct small errors. Use a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details, and a linking word if needed. In English (Thailand): พูดให้ชัด เจาะจงรายละเอียด และแก้คำศัพท์ที่สะกด/ออกเสียงผิด เช่น ‘cityscapes’ แทน ‘CSD scapes’.

例: Yes, I do. Photographing scenery is one of my favourite hobbies because it helps me preserve memories of places I visit. For example, I love capturing sunsets and cityscapes since the changing light and colours make photos more dramatic.

提案: Good structure and clear preference with reasons. To improve, add a linking word to connect ideas more smoothly and include one specific example to make it more vivid. Keep sentences varied and avoid general phrases. In English (Thailand): ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น ‘because’ หรือ ‘for example’ และยกตัวอย่างเฉพาะเจาะจงเพื่อให้ภาพชัดขึ้น.

例: I like both, as they create very different moods. However, I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and offer relaxing mountain or sea views — for example, a sunrise over a nearby beach helps me unwind.

提案: The idea is clear but there are multiple word-choice and grammar mistakes ("wheels" -> "both", "summary bright" -> unclear, "counties" -> "countries", "climbers" -> unclear). Fix vocabulary and give one clear contrast with specific details. Use correct linking words like ‘for example’ and simple adjectives. In English (Thailand): แก้คำผิดและใช้คำที่เหมาะสม เช่น ‘both’, ‘sunny’, ‘temperate’ และยกตัวอย่างเปรียบเทียบที่ชัดเจน.

例: I prefer both my own country and other countries because each has a unique atmosphere. For example, views in Thailand often feel warm with bright sunlight and tropical colours, whereas views in some European countries can feel cooler and more subdued, with misty hills or historic cityscapes.

× I especially like photographing sunsets and CSD scapes because the light and color are beautiful.

✓ I especially like photographing sunsets and cityscapes because the light and colors are beautiful.

The word 'CSD scapes' appears to be a typo; correct word is 'cityscapes' (compound noun). Also 'color' should be plural 'colors' when referring to multiple colors in scenes. Use 'cityscapes' and 'colors' to be grammatically and semantically correct.

× If I had to choose, I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and often have beautiful mountain and sea views which help me relax.

✓ If I had to choose, I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and often have beautiful mountain and sea views that help me relax.

The sentence used 'which' to introduce a defining result clause; in spoken English 'that' is more appropriate for restrictive clauses. The main issue flagged is plural agreement between 'mountain and sea views' and the verb 'help' which is correct; change 'which' to 'that' for clarity and correct restrictive clause usage.

× Honestly, I prefer wheels both in my country and abroad because each place has a unique atmosphere.

✓ Honestly, I prefer views both in my country and abroad because each place has a unique atmosphere.

The word 'wheels' is a wrong word choice (lexical error). Based on context the intended noun is 'views'. Replace 'wheels' with 'views' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× For example, views in Thailand often feel warm and summary bright sunlight and tropical colors, while views in other counties can feel climbers.

✓ For example, views in Thailand often feel warm and summery, with bright sunlight and tropical colors, while views in other countries can feel calmer.

Multiple errors: 'summary' is incorrect form; correct adjective is 'summery' meaning characteristic of summer. The phrase needs reordering: use 'with bright sunlight and tropical colors' to list features. 'Counties' is a typo for 'countries'. 'Climbers' is wrong word; likely intended 'calmer' (more calm). These corrections fix word choice and adjective form errors and improve sentence clarity.