Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tu respuesta es clara y natural, pero puedes mejorar añadiendo una oración temática más directa y un detalle concreto que explique por qué prefieres no tomar fotos. Usa un conector breve para que la idea fluya mejor. Por ejemplo, comienza con "No, I don't" y luego añade la razón con "because" o "so" y un ejemplo específico de una situación. Mantén la respuesta dentro de 3–4 oraciones.

例: No, I don't like taking pictures of views because I prefer to experience the scene without distractions. For instance, when I'm at a beach or a concert I ask my girlfriend to take photos so I can focus on the atmosphere. This way I remember the moment better without worrying about camera settings.

提案: Buena respuesta: tienes una oración temática clara y un ejemplo específico. Para mejorar, añade un conector lógico para unir la razón y el ejemplo (por ejemplo "for example" ya está bien) y añade un detalle más concreto sobre qué aspecto de la atmósfera te atrae (sonidos, arquitectura, vida nocturna). Mantén la respuesta dentro de 3–4 oraciones.

例: I prefer urban areas because I live in Montevideo and I enjoy the lively atmosphere and cultural life. For example, the city has many museums, cozy cafés and frequent live concerts, which makes weekends interesting. I also like the mix of historic and modern architecture that gives each neighborhood a unique feel.

提案: Respuesta clara y directa; sin embargo, agrega un motivo más específico y un ejemplo concreto para enriquecer la respuesta. Usa un conector como "because" y añade una breve explicación de qué te aporta visitar edificios emblemáticos (historia, cultura, vistas panorámicas). Limita la respuesta a 3–4 oraciones para mayor eficacia.

例: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me discover new cultures and landmarks. For example, when I visit a city I usually plan to see its main building or cathedral to learn about its history and enjoy panoramic views. These visits help me understand local architecture and traditions better.

× I don't like taking pictures at all, in fact I usually ask my girlfriend to take them so I can fully enjoy the moment.

✓ I don't like taking pictures at all; in fact, I usually ask my girlfriend to take them so I can fully enjoy the moment.

The original sentence is mostly correct grammatically regarding verb forms, but it needs punctuation improvements for clarity: replace the comma splice with a semicolon or period and add a comma after 'in fact'. Suggestion: use a semicolon to join two independent clauses or make them separate sentences. This improves readability and correctness.

× For example, there are always museums, cafes and concerts nearby.

✓ For example, there are always museums, cafés, and concerts nearby.

The sentence is grammatically correct regarding plurality, but adding the Oxford comma (optional in English) and correct accent on 'cafés' improves style. No plural error to correct; this suggestion is stylistic to enhance clarity.

× I prefer views in other countries because I like traveling and discovering new places.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I like traveling and discovering new places.

This sentence is already correct; the verbs 'traveling' and 'discovering' are correctly used as gerunds following 'like'. No change needed.

× When I go abroad, I try to arrange the visit to the main building of the city.

✓ When I go abroad, I try to arrange a visit to the main buildings of the city.

Use of articles and noun number: 'arrange the visit to the main building of the city' sounds unnatural. More natural is 'arrange a visit' (indefinite article) and 'main buildings' plural if you mean key landmarks, or 'the main building' if there's a single notable building. Suggest: use 'a visit' and pluralize 'building' to 'buildings' when referring to multiple landmarks.