Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. For a better score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two supporting details, and keep it under five sentences. Use linking words if you add reasons or examples. For example, state whether you like taking pictures, why, and give a short example.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places and moods. For instance, when I visited the coast last year I photographed the sunrise to capture the colors. I also like experimenting with composition, such as framing buildings or trees to create contrast.

提案: Your answer both repeats and misphrases the question and does not provide a personal preference. Reply with a clear preference, explain one or two reasons, and give a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and keep answers concise.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because I find nature more peaceful and photogenic. For example, I like photographing rolling hills and small farms, which offer varied textures and natural light. Urban scenery can be interesting too, but I usually choose the countryside for relaxing shots.

提案: Again you repeated the question instead of answering. State your preference clearly, give reasons and a brief example to support your view. Keep it natural and avoid long repetition of the examiner's words.

例: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me discover different landscapes and cultures. For example, I photographed mountain villages abroad that looked very different from those at home, which broadened my perspective. However, I also appreciate local scenery when I want short weekend trips.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views?

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of different views.

The student's response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/pragmatic error (falls under Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Provide a full answer using the auxiliary verb do for present simple: 'Yes, I do' then a brief elaboration 'I like taking pictures of different views.' This matches the present simple question and gives a clear answer.

× Do you perform views in urban areas or rural areas?

✓ I prefer views in urban areas.

The student used 'perform views', which is incorrect verb choice. This is a sentence structure/word choice issue (ID 26). The examiner asked 'Do you prefer views...', so the correct reply should use 'prefer' and state the preference. Use present simple 'I prefer' + object. If they prefer rural areas, answer accordingly: 'I prefer views in rural areas.'

× Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

✓ I prefer views in my own country.

The student's reply repeated the question rather than answering. This is a sentence structure/pragmatic error (ID 26). Provide a concise answer using present simple 'I prefer' and specify which option. If the preference is the other option, say 'I prefer views in other countries.'