Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 总体回答自然、详尽，内容清晰并有支持细节。但有些表达不够简练，句子略多，存在轻微重复（如“remember special moments and places”与“sharing my pictures”信息接近）。建议在回答开头用一句主题句直接回应问题，然后用1–2个简短支持句并用连词连接，避免重复，提高词汇多样性（例如用“preserve memories”替换“remember”）。

例: Yes, I love photographing different views, especially when I travel. It helps me preserve memories and I enjoy experimenting with angles and lighting to capture unique shots, which I often share with friends online.

提案: 回答有思路，但语言多处不自然或用词错误（如“urban wheels”“city flight line”“rooftop waves”应为 urban areas、city skyline、rooftops）。时态和一致性也有小问题（found → find）。建议用准确的词汇并保持时态一致，开头直接表明偏好，随后用一两条具体原因并用连接词衔接。

例: I prefer urban areas because I enjoy the city skyline at night and the striking architecture. In addition, rooftops and city parks offer diverse perspectives of urban life, so I often find them more inspiring for photography.

提案: 回答内容明确且有个人情感，但存在表达不自然与词汇使用问题（如“so many beautiful places I have explored yet”应为“haven't explored yet”或“have explored”; “family trees”用法不当，建议用“family”或“childhood memories”）。建议调整句子结构以更准确表达对比，并加入连接词使逻辑更流畅。

例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the landscapes and they often bring back childhood memories. Also, there are still many beautiful places I haven't explored yet, and domestic travel is usually easier and cheaper than going abroad.

× I definitely prefer urban wheels.

✓ I definitely prefer urban areas.

原句使用了“urban wheels”，這不是正確的搭配或詞彙，導致句子意思不清。考生想表達“城市地區”，正確用法是“urban areas”或“urban settings”。建議記住常見搭配，如 “urban area/urban life/city centre”。

× There's something about the city flight line at night with all the lines and interesting architecture that I found really exciting.

✓ There's something about the city skyline at night with all the lights and interesting architecture that I find really exciting.

原句中“city flight line”和“lines”使用不當，並且時態不一致（主句用現在時的“There's... that I find”，但句尾用了過去式“found”）。正確表達應為“city skyline”（城市天際線）和“lights”（燈光）。建議將動詞時態統一為現在時以匹配一般描述：使用“find”。

× I also enjoy rooftop waves and city parks because they show the different side of the city life.

✓ I also enjoy rooftops and city parks because they show the different side of city life.

原句“rooftop waves”不是自然搭配，且“the different side of the city life”中冠詞使用和名詞搭配有誤。應改為“rooftops”或“rooftop views”，並把“the different side of city life”改為不帶定冠詞的“city life”。建議學習常見名詞短語搭配，如“rooftop views”，“city parks”，“city life”。

× There are so many beautiful places I have explored yet, and local views often remind me of my childhood and family trees.

✓ There are so many beautiful places I have yet to explore, and local views often remind me of my childhood and my family.

原句“places I have explored yet”時序和詞序錯誤，應使用“have yet to explore”表示“尚未探索”。另外“family trees”字面意思為“家族譜/家譜”，不符合語境，應為“my family”。建議熟悉“have yet to do sth.”結構和常見詞彙搭配。