Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa, karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Öncelikle soruya doğrudan ve net cevap verin (örneğin: 'No, I don't.') Sonra maksimum 2-3 destekleyici cümleyle nedeninizi açıklayın. Bağlaçlar (because, when, if) ve basit zaman yapıları kullanarak cümleleri netleştirin. Örneğin geçmiş deneyimi ya da tercih sebebinizi açıkça belirtin ve gereksiz tekrarları/eksik kelimeleri düzeltin.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of views because I prefer to enjoy the moment when I visit places like the sea or a garden. When I travel, I focus on the experience rather than taking pictures, so I only take a few photos occasionally.

提案: Cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimi düzeltilmeli. Soruyu doğrudan cevaplayın, sonra nedeninizi açıkça verin. Uygun sıfatlar ve bağlaçlar kullanın (e.g. peaceful, refreshing, because). 'Weaves' yerine 'views' ve 'unexpiring/unexpecting' yerine uygun kelimeler kullanın. Ayrıca son cümlenizdeki karışıklığı giderin.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel more peaceful and refreshing than cityscapes. For example, I enjoy quiet fields and forests where I can relax, whereas urban views are often crowded and noisy.

提案: Cevabınızda gurur ve örnekler güzel, fakat dilbilgisi ve akıcılık eksik. 'Turkey have' yerine 'Turkey has' kullanılmalı. Tek bir nedenden çok en fazla iki kısa destek verin ve örnekleri mantıklı bir bağlaçla bağlayın. Son eksik cümleyi tamamlayın veya çıkartın.

例: I prefer views in my own country because Turkey has some of the most beautiful landscapes, such as Cappadocia, Istanbul and Izmir. For instance, Cappadocia's unique rock formations and hot-air balloons are unlike anything I've seen abroad.

× No, because I like to be being a moment like you go somewhere or some somewhere like sea or garden. I solved this and.

✓ No, because I like to be in the moment when I go somewhere, for example to the sea or a garden.

The student used the incorrect structure 'like to be being a moment'. English uses 'to be in the moment' or 'to be present' to express focusing on the present. The error fits the 'Verb + -ing form' category because 'being' is used incorrectly after 'to be'. Also 'some somewhere' and 'I solved this and' are unclear and ungrammatical. Suggestion: use fixed expression 'to be in the moment' and give clear examples with 'for example' or 'such as'. Use simple clause structure: 'I like to be in the moment when I go somewhere, such as the sea or a garden.'

× I prefer weaves in rural areas because I find them unexpiring, unexpecting and I live in the. Urban.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I find them unexpected and inspiring, and I live in a rural area.

The student wrote 'weaves' instead of 'views' and used nonstandard words 'unexpiring, unexpecting'. These are incorrect adjectives. This fits 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs'. Also 'I live in the. Urban.' is sentence structure and article misuse. Suggestions: use correct noun 'views', choose appropriate adjectives like 'unexpected' or 'inspiring', and correct the clause about residence to 'I live in a rural area' or 'I live in the countryside.'

× I prefer my own country views because Turkey have best views all over the world because we have Cappadocia, Istanbul and Izmir.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country because Turkey has some of the best scenery in the world; we have Cappadocia, Istanbul, and Izmir.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'Turkey'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Also 'country views' is awkward and 'best views' needs an article or qualifier. Suggestion: use 'Turkey has' for third person singular and 'some of the best scenery' or 'some of the best views' with articles; list examples clearly with commas.

× In one day I.

✓ (This sentence is incomplete and unclear; possible correction: 'I can visit many places in one day.')

The original is a fragment with no verb or clear meaning, so it fits 'Sentence structure errors'. The student likely intended to say they can visit multiple places in a single day. Suggestion: complete the thought with a subject and verb, for example 'I can visit many places in one day' or 'I could see several sights in one day.'