Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然、语法正确并且简洁。先用一句主题句直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意动词形式（例如 “take” 应为 “take photos” 或 “take photographs”），避免无意义的停顿和重复，句子不宜过长或杂乱。可以用连接词（because, so, for example）让表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different scenes. I especially like capturing small details and landscapes because they remind me of moments and feelings. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street corners when I travel because they help me remember the atmosphere.

提案: 回答需要更有条理和语法清晰。先直接说偏好（urban或rural），然后用一到两句具体原因支持，使用恰当的词汇（例如 “natural”, “peaceful”, “relaxing”），避免不明意思的词如 “required” 或 “smooth”。保持句子数量在五句以内，并用连接词（because, so, which）增强逻辑。

例: I prefer rural areas because they are more natural and peaceful. The quiet surroundings help me relax and think clearly, and I enjoy spending time outdoors admiring fields and trees.

提案: 回答要更加明确并且语法正确。先直接回答偏好，然后解释原因并给出具体信息。避免模糊或错误表达（如 “I don't have to make it”），应说 “I haven't had the chance” 或 “I haven't prepared for travel yet”。可提及具体国家或景点作为例子，使内容更具体。

例: I would like to see scenery in other countries because I’m curious about different landscapes and cultures. However, I haven’t had the chance to travel abroad yet. My country, China, also has amazing scenery such as the Guilin karst mountains and the Yellow Mountains.

× I like take the photograph by my own because I like the scenery and the little things Rd. Times that I'm interested in because yeah, I think it's very interesting and can make me commemorate.

✓ I like taking photographs by myself because I like the scenery and small details that interest me. I think it's very interesting and helps me remember moments.

问题类型：8（动词 + -ing 形式）和26（句子结构错误）。 解释：原句中“I like take”应使用动词-ing 形式，正确为“I like taking”。“the photograph”在泛指爱好时应使用复数或不定式复数形式“photographs”，并且“by my own”是不正确的短语，应为“by myself”。“the little things Rd. Times that I'm interested in”这部分语序混乱且有拼写错误，需改为“small details that interest me”。最后“can make me commemorate”用词生硬且不自然，改成“helps me remember moments”。 建议：在表达喜好时用 like + -ing；注意代词短语（by myself）；把杂乱的信息拆成两个句子，保持语序清晰。

× Oh yeah, I like the rural areas, so the scenery because I think it's very in nature and so freedom and required and make me feel smooth and I can spend my own time to think. Yeah.

✓ Oh yeah, I like rural areas because of the scenery. I think they are very natural and peaceful, which makes me feel relaxed and allows me to spend time thinking.

问题类型：26（句子结构错误）和13（形容词/副词使用错误）。 解释：原句中“so the scenery”连接不当，应为“because of the scenery”。“very in nature”不是正确表达，应为“very natural”或“close to nature”。“so freedom and required”词不当且语义不明，推测想表达“很自由、很放松”，应使用“peaceful/relaxed”。“make me feel smooth”用词错误，应为“make me feel relaxed”。最后“spend my own time to think”更自然的表达是“spend time thinking”或“spend my time thinking”。 建议：用清晰的连接词（because of），用正确形容词（natural, peaceful, relaxed），用动词+ing 表达持续动作（spend time thinking）。

× To be honest, I really want to see the scenery of other countries. But now I don't have to make it because I don't make full preparation to my own country.

✓ To be honest, I really want to see the scenery in other countries. But right now I can't because I haven't fully prepared to travel abroad from my country.

问题类型：4（情态动词使用）和26（句子结构错误）。 解释：原句“But now I don't have to make it”含义混乱，“don't have to” 表示“不必”，与想表达的“现在做不到/不能去”不符，应使用“can't”或“am not able to”。“I don't make full preparation to my own country”语法和介词使用错误，正确应为“I haven't fully prepared to travel abroad”或“I haven't made full preparations”。此外“to my own country”错置，实际上应说明“从我的国家出发/去其他国家旅行”。 建议：区分“don't have to”（不必）和“can't”（不能）；使用完成时表达尚未完成的准备（haven't made full preparations / haven't fully prepared）；使用正确介词短语（travel to other countries / travel abroad）。

× My own country is China. It's very wonderful scenery.

✓ My country is China. It has very wonderful scenery.

问题类型：22（冠词错误）和26（句子结构错误）。 解释：原句“My own country is China.”虽然可接受，但更自然为“My country is China.” 第二句“It’s very wonderful scenery.”语序错误，代词“it”不能直接指代不可数名词短语“scenery”的特性，正确结构是“It has very wonderful scenery”或“The scenery in my country is wonderful”。 建议：描述国家的风景时用“has + 名词”或改用定语句（The scenery in my country is wonderful）。