Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Expand slightly beyond a one-word affirmation. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word (for example or because) to make the response more natural and informative.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice details I would otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines to capture changing light and atmosphere.

提案: Give a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add a brief reason or contrast using a linking word (because or while) to make the response more coherent and natural.

例: I prefer views in urban areas because I like the energy of cityscapes and the variety of buildings. While rural views are peaceful, I find the patterns and lights of the city more interesting to photograph.

提案: Correct unclear vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence (I prefer views in my country / I prefer views in other countries) then give a specific reason and an example. Avoid filler words (uh) and use accurate nouns (landscapes, scenes, architecture) instead of confusing words like 'wheels'.

例: I love views in my own country because I’m familiar with the landscapes and cultural details. However, I’m also interested in views from other countries, especially historic architecture and coastal scenery, which offer new perspectives for my photos.

× I prefer in urban areas.

✓ I prefer urban areas.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the thing preferred without the preposition 'in'. Use 'prefer urban areas' or 'prefer living in urban areas' if you want to include 'in'. Suggestion: Remove the preposition or rephrase to 'prefer living in urban areas'.

× I love my country's wheels, but uh, actually I interesting in other countries also.

✓ I love my country's scenery, but actually I'm interested in other countries as well.

There are multiple issues: 'wheels' is likely the wrong noun here and should be 'scenery' (lexical choice). 'I interesting' is grammatically incorrect: the correct structure is the verb 'to be' plus past participle 'interested' (a participial adjective), so 'I'm interested'. Also add 'in' before 'other countries' to show the correct prepositional phrase, and 'as well' or 'also' should be placed at the end or appropriately. Suggestion: Use 'I'm interested in other countries as well' or 'I am also interested in other countries.'