Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорите полными предложениями и прямо отвечайте на вопрос. Используйте связующие слова и давайте конкретные детали: почему вам нравятся виды (например, цвета, архитектура или атмосфера). Избегайте неправильного порядка слов и недостающих артиклей. Практикуйте: 1) начать с простой топик-фразы, 2) добавить одну-две поддерживающие детали и 3) закончить коротким заключением.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because they often show beautiful colours and interesting shapes. For example, old buildings or mountain landscapes can look very dramatic in photos, so I try to capture their atmosphere.

提案: Отвечайте прямо и объясняйте выбор. Дайте конкретную причину и приведите пример в 1–2 дополнительных предложениях, используя связующие слова (because, so, for example). Избегайте неясных фраз типа "I don't know what this is" и личных реплик, не относящихся к теме.

例: I prefer views in urban areas because I like the mix of architecture and busy streets. For example, city skylines at sunset look impressive, and I enjoy photographing reflections in glass buildings.

提案: Формулируйте полные и ясные предложения, объясняя причину своего предпочтения. Уточняйте, что именно вам интересно в родных местах (культура, природа, знакомые пейзажи) и приводите конкретный пример. Избегайте ошибок с местоимениями и словосочетаниями; используйте связки (because, so, for instance).

例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more connected to the landscapes and culture. For instance, local festivals and traditional buildings often have details that I understand better and like to photograph.

× I like. Seeing picture this very. Beautiful and ancient, historical.

✓ I like it. This picture is very beautiful and historical.

The original contains sentence fragments and incorrect word order. Combine fragments into complete sentences and supply the missing pronoun and verb. Use 'I like it' (object pronoun required), 'This picture is' to link subject and adjective, 'very beautiful and historical' to describe it. Suggestion: practice forming subject-verb-complement sentences and placing adjectives after the linking verb.

× I prefer urban areas. I don't know what this is, but this is like me.

✓ I prefer urban areas. I'm not sure why, but this suits me.

'I don't know what this is' is unnatural in this context and 'this is like me' is incorrect word choice and structure. Use 'I'm not sure why' to express uncertainty and 'this suits me' or 'this appeals to me' to express preference. Suggestion: use natural expressions for vague reasoning and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer own country. I like. Because this is leaf more interesting in.

✓ I prefer my own country. I like it because it is more interesting here.

Missing possessive pronoun 'my' and object pronoun 'it' are required. The clause 'Because this is leaf more interesting in' is ungrammatical and likely a word-order and word-choice error; replace with 'because it is more interesting here'. Also avoid sentence fragments starting with 'Because' without a main clause. Suggestion: include necessary possessive and object pronouns and place adverbial words (here) at end of clause for clarity.