Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 发音和语法需要改进，并且回答过于简短和重复。建议：1) 修正语法错误（例如：'I like to take pictures of different views'）；2) 避免重复短语，保持句子简洁；3) 增加一到两句具体细节（拍什么类型的景色、用什么设备或拍照时的感受）并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and mountain landscapes because I like capturing light and atmosphere, and I usually use my smartphone or a small digital camera to do this.

提案: 句子中有明显词汇错误（'wolves' 应该是 'views'），语法和表达需要更准确。建议：1) 使用正确词汇并直接给出偏好（'I prefer rural views'）；2) 提供具体原因并用连接词（because, so）把原因和结论连起来；3) 增加一两个细节说明你为什么喜欢乡村景色（如宁静、自然元素）。

例: I prefer views in rural areas because I love the tranquility and natural scenery. For example, wide fields and forests help me relax, so I often choose countryside spots when I go out to take photos.

提案: 流畅性和语法需要改进，存在词序和词形错误（例如 'prefer will see'、'connect connection'、'W open'）。建议：1) 简洁直接地表达偏好（'I prefer views in my own country'）；2) 修正连接短语并使用适当的形容词来描述景色；3) 提供两个具体例子并用连接词（for example, also）串联，使回答既具体又连贯。

例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel a strong emotional connection to the landscapes. For example, I love the Mongolian grasslands for their wide open scenery, and our coastline offers peaceful beaches where I often go to relax and take photos.

× Yes, I like I like take pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

句中動詞 after 'like' 應接動名詞（-ing 形式）或不定式，常用的是動名詞。原句用了重複的 'I like' 且把動詞用原形 'take' 放在 'like' 之後，結構不正確。建議刪除重複的 'I like' 並把 'take' 改為 'taking'。

× I like wolves in rural areas because I like nature.

✓ I like views in rural areas because I like nature.

學生原句使用了 'wolves'（狼），顯然與上下文 'views'（風景）不符，應為名詞選擇錯誤。這不是語法變位而是詞彙選擇錯誤。建議將 'wolves' 改為 'views' 以符合語境。

× I prefer will see my own country because I feel a strong emotional connect connection to the landscape.

✓ I prefer to see my own country because I feel a strong emotional connection to the landscape.

動詞 'prefer' 後通常接不定式 'to' 或動名詞，不能直接接未來式 'will see'。另外 'connect' 是動詞，這裡應用名詞 'connection'。建議把 'will see' 改為 'to see'，並把 'connect' 改為 'connection'。

× For example, I love the Mongolian grasslands for their W open scenery and our beautiful coastline offers peaceful seaside.

✓ For example, I love the Mongolian grasslands for their wide open scenery, and our beautiful coastline offers a peaceful seaside.

原句有幾處問題：'W' 顯然是誤植，應為形容詞 'wide'；形容 'open scenery' 時需 'wide open scenery' 表示廣闊開闊的風景；連接兩部分時需用逗號加連詞 'and' 使句子結構清晰；'offers peaceful seaside' 的搭配不自然，應為 'offers a peaceful seaside' 或 'is a peaceful seaside'，此處加不定冠詞 'a' 更恰當。建議修正誤植、補充冠詞並調整詞序。