Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 总体回答自然且表达了明确立场，但存在重复词、语法和时态问题（例如“take camera”、“whenever I saw”）。建议： 1) 精简冗余，避免口头禅（如“uh”）以显得更流利。 2) 注意动词和时态的一致性（使用现在时描述习惯性动作）。 3) 增加一两句具体细节或原因，使回答更丰富但不要超过五句。 具体练习：把句子改为更地道的表达并加入一两个细节。

例: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. I usually carry my camera whenever I go out and photograph anything that catches my eye, such as colorful sunsets or interesting cityscapes. This habit helps me remember places and improve my photography skills.

提案: 回答传达了偏好和原因，但存在重复（“where where”）、语法不准确和比较结构不完整。建议： 1) 修正重复词并简化句子结构； 2) 使用恰当的比较表达（e.g. “more ... than”）； 3) 如能给出具体例子（某种景色或拍摄场景），会更有说服力。

例: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside often has mountains and rivers that offer diverse photo opportunities. For example, I enjoy photographing misty hills at sunrise, which you rarely see in the city.

提案: 回答表达了意图，但有明显语法错误、重复（“I have living in my living in”，“is common is common”）和句子未完成，导致不清晰。建议： 1) 修复时态与语序（如使用“I have lived in China for about 20 years”）； 2) 避免重复并把句子说完整，给出具体想看的“特殊”景观类型或原因； 3) 保持句子数量不超过五句并使用连接词使逻辑流畅。

例: I prefer views in other countries because I have lived in China for about 20 years, so many local landscapes feel familiar to me. I want to see unique places I haven't experienced before, such as coastal cliffs in Norway or traditional villages in Japan.

× I always take camera with me and uh, whenever I saw beautiful views, I will take photos.

✓ I always take a camera with me and, whenever I see beautiful views, I take photos.

句中缺少不定冠词“a”。英語中可數單數名詞（camera）前須加冠詞或其他限定詞。此外，句中時態須保持一致：表習慣動作應使用一般現在時，將“saw”改為“see”，將“will take”改為“一般現在時”take以表示習慣。建議：可數單數名詞前加a/an；描述習慣用一般現在時。

× Well for me I prefer views in rural areas since most countryside are surrounded by beautiful mountains and rivers where where I can take numerous photos than in urban areas.

✓ Well, for me I prefer views in rural areas since most of the countryside is surrounded by beautiful mountains and rivers where I can take more photos than in urban areas.

原句中“most countryside are”主謂不一致。'countryside'通常作不可數名詞或表示整體時視為單數，應用單數動詞is，並在most後加of以形成固定搭配“most of the countryside”。此外，'numerous ... than' 用法不當，應使用比較級'more photos'表示“比城市能拍更多照片”。建議：注意主語是否單數或不可數，動詞與之保持一致；比較時用more + 可數名詞。

× Well, I prefer views in other countries since I have living in my living in China for about 20 years and the landscape in my cities is common is common one for me and I wanted to see special and.

✓ Well, I prefer views in other countries since I have been living in China for about 20 years and the landscapes in my cities are common to me, and I want to see something special.

句中時態與動詞形式錯誤：'have living' 應為現在完成進行時'have been living'以表從過去持續到現在的狀態；'the landscape in my cities is common is common one for me' 重複且搭配不當，應改為'landscapes...are common to me'；最後一部分用過去時'wanted'不符合語境，應使用現在時'want'表示現在的願望。建議：表從過去持續到現在的動作用'have/has been + -ing'，避免不必要的重複，保持句內時態一致以反映說話者當前狀態和願望。

× I always take camera with me and uh, whenever I saw beautiful views, I will take photos.

✓ I always take a camera with me and, whenever I see beautiful views, I take photos.

短語'take camera with me'缺少介詞a之前無需額外介詞，但'with me'的位置與用法是正確的；主要問題是冠詞缺失（見前）和時態。此處重申：注意名詞前的冠詞和動詞時態。（此條目主要指出介詞/介系詞使用需注意搭配，如'with me'與動詞搭配正確）」}]}