Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且内容相关，但可以更直接回应问题开头并使用更连贯的连接词使表达更有条理。另外可以加入更具体的细节（比如用什么设备、拍摄角度或拍摄目的）来丰富内容。注意句子数量控制在五句以内并避免重复。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially when the light is right. For example, I often capture sunsets and quiet streets while traveling because the warm light and empty lanes create a peaceful mood. I usually use my phone or a compact camera and try shooting from low angles to emphasize depth. These moments help me remember the atmosphere of a place.

提案: 回答直接且有理由支持，但可使用连接词来更流畅地连接原因，并加入更具体的比较细节（例如城市的嘈杂元素与乡村的具体景象对比）。同时可给出一两句关于何时喜欢乡村景色的例子。

例: I prefer rural views because the countryside feels more open and peaceful compared to noisy cities. For example, fields and rivers allow me to relax and hear birdsong, whereas urban views often have traffic and crowds that feel stressful. After long periods in a busy city, I especially appreciate the quiet and fresh air of small towns.

提案: 表达情感真挚且有例子，但“小错误”如“emotional connected”需改为“emotionally connected”。可以通过说明具体回忆或比较国内外景色差异来增加细节。此外用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I enjoy views in both my country and abroad, but those at home feel more emotionally connected. For instance, mountains and old streets in Taiwan remind me of childhood walks and family gatherings, so they feel especially meaningful. In contrast, views abroad are exciting because they offer new perspectives and cultures.

× Yes I do, especially when the light is nice or view feels special.

✓ Yes, I do, especially when the light is nice or the view feels special.

句子缺少逗号和冠词“the”。此处談論特定情境（光線或景色），應使用定冠詞“the”。建議在“Yes”和“I”之間加入逗號，並在“view”前加上“the”。

× For example, I like taking photos of sunsets, mountains, or quiet streets when traveling.

✓ For example, I like taking photos of sunsets, mountains, or quiet streets when I travel.

時間狀語從句的表達更自然要用主語加動詞而非現在分詞片語。原句用“when traveling”會造成主語不明。建議改為“When I travel”以明確主語。

× Places like the countryside or small towns feel more open and calm.

✓ Places like the countryside and small towns feel more open and calm.

連詞使用不當。“or”在此會使比較對象不清楚，通常列舉多個類別時用“and”。建議把“or”改為“and”。（此問題屬於現在時態使用與連詞選擇的混合，主要影響句意）

× Seeing fields, mountains or rivers helps me relax and especially after spending a lot of time in busy cities.

✓ Seeing fields, mountains, or rivers helps me relax, especially after spending a lot of time in busy cities.

句子缺少逗號導致片語連接不流暢。應在“relax”後加逗號來引出“especially”短語，讓句子結構更清晰。

× Well, I enjoy both, but views in my country feel more familiar and emotional connected.

✓ Well, I enjoy both, but views in my country feel more familiar and emotionally connected.

“emotional connected”用法錯誤。應使用副詞修飾形容詞或動詞，正確為“emotionally connected”。另外句子中“views”為複數，與動詞搭配正確。建議將“emotional”改為“emotionally”。

× For example, mountains and streets in Taiwan often remind me of my childhood and everyday life, which makes them extra special and meaningful.

✓ For example, mountains and streets in Taiwan often remind me of my childhood and everyday life, which makes them especially special and meaningful.

“extra special”在正式書面語中可以，但和“especially”搭配更自然以強調。原句語義上可接受，但為了語感建議用“especially special”或直接“especially meaningful”。此處標注為現在時態語感調整。