Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Start with a direct response to the question, then give a brief reason or example. Use correct subject-verb agreement and relevant vocabulary (e.g., "I like taking pictures of different views"). Keep it natural and concise (up to 3–4 short sentences).

例: Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes and animals because they show interesting colours and shapes. I find it relaxing and it helps me notice details I would otherwise miss.

提案: Your sentence is grammatically incorrect and vague. Provide a clear preference first, then explain why using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Use singular/plural correctly and choose precise words (e.g., "urban areas", "rural areas", "atmosphere"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the energy and architecture of cities. For instance, city skylines and street scenes often have interesting lighting and activity, which I like to capture in photos.

提案: This answer is very unclear and ungrammatical. State your preference directly (e.g., "I prefer views in my own country") and give a specific reason or example, mentioning the place correctly (e.g., "Cyprus"). Keep it concise and coherent, using linking words if adding details.

例: I prefer views in my own country, Cyprus, because I know the best spots and their seasonal changes. For example, coastal villages and historic towns here have unique colours and light that I enjoy photographing.

× I am like a beautiful picture of animals.

✓ I like taking beautiful pictures of animals.

The original sentence uses 'I am like', which is incorrect for expressing preference; this is a sentence structure and verb usage error (use of 'be' + like incorrectly). Replace with simple present 'I like' to state a habitual preference. Also use the plural 'pictures' to match general activity and 'taking' to show the action of photographing. Suggestion: use 'I like taking beautiful pictures of animals.' Note: This corresponds to problem types 6 (Present tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× I am like an urban areas and the atmosphere of environmental.

✓ I like urban areas and the environmental atmosphere.

The phrase 'I am like' is incorrect; use 'I like' to express preference (present tense). 'an urban areas' mixes singular article with plural noun—use either 'an urban area' (singular) or 'urban areas' (plural) without 'an'. 'the atmosphere of environmental' is incorrect word order and word choice; use 'environmental atmosphere' or better 'the atmosphere of the environment' though 'environmental atmosphere' is more natural. Suggestion: 'I like urban areas and the environmental atmosphere.' Note: This corresponds to problem types 6 (Present tense issue), 1 (Singular and plural issue), and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) / 22 (Article errors).

× I am his own in town of country in Cyprus.

✓ I prefer towns in my country, Cyprus.

The original is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and word order. 'I am his own' is ungrammatical; to answer the examiner's question about preferring views in own country, say 'I prefer towns in my country, Cyprus.' This uses the present simple 'prefer' to state habitual preference and 'my country' as the correct possessive. Alternatively: 'I prefer my hometown in Cyprus.' This fixes sentence structure (type 26) and incorrect use of pronouns (type 12) and verb choice (type 6).