Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak in complete, grammatical sentences and directly answer the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + short reason), then add one specific detail using a linking phrase. Focus on correct word order, articles, and simple vocabulary rather than mixing many ideas. For example, say you enjoy photographing views, explain what kinds you like and why.

例: Yes, I do enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing colours and light. For example, I often photograph sunsets and brightly coloured buildings because their warm colours, like yellow and orange, look beautiful in photos.

提案: Give a clear preference in a full sentence, then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words (because/so/for example). Use correct nouns and plural/singular forms and simple adjectives. Avoid mixing contradictory ideas without clarification.

例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the architecture and lively streets. For example, I like photographing city parks where green grass contrasts with modern buildings, which makes the pictures interesting.

提案: Directly answer the comparison question: state a preference for views at home or abroad, and give a reason. Begin with a topic sentence (I prefer.../I like both...), then add a specific example or reason. Use correct verb forms and prepositions (I live in India, I prefer views in my country).

例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel connected to the landscapes and culture. For instance, in India I enjoy photographing colourful festivals and historic sites that I know well and can capture authentically.

× I am like a different pictures of different colours in the my colour is beautiful is yellow.

✓ I like different pictures of various colours; my favourite colour is yellow.

Errors: incorrect verb phrase 'I am like' (should be simple present 'I like') and singular/plural/article issues 'a different pictures' (mixes singular article with plural noun). Redundant and ungrammatical clause 'in the my colour is beautiful is yellow' should be split and rephrased. Suggestion: Use simple present 'I like' for preferences, ensure articles match nouns (no 'a' with plural 'pictures'), and separate ideas with a semicolon or two sentences to make meaning clear. Use 'favourite colour is yellow' to express preference.

× I am like an urban areas and green grasses.

✓ I like urban areas and green grass.

Errors: 'I am like' is incorrect; use simple present 'I like' to state preferences. 'an urban areas' mixes singular article 'an' with plural 'areas' — remove the article or use singular 'an urban area'. 'green grasses' is unnatural; 'grass' is an uncountable noun when referring to vegetation generally. Suggestion: Use 'I like urban areas and green grass' or 'I like urban areas and green fields' for clarity.

× I am in living in India.

✓ I am living in India.

Error: Extra preposition 'in' before the continuous verb phrase. Correct present continuous form is 'I am living in India' to indicate current residence. Suggestion: Use 'I live in India' (simple present) for a general fact or 'I am living in India' (present continuous) to emphasize a temporary situation; do not include an extra 'in'.