Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子有语法和时态错误，表达重复且过长。回答应更直接并用连接词组织细节；将动词形式改为正确的时态，删除多余词语，并补充一两处具体细节（例如拍摄主题或用途）。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel. I usually use my phone to capture landscapes, cityscapes and local architecture, so later I can look back at the images and remember the places I visited. These photos also help me share my trips with friends.

提案: 回答含有语法错误和非自然表达，如“more prefer”“it's more better”。应直接表明偏好，给出清晰理由并用连词连接，例如比较两者并举例说明城市景观的具体吸引点。

例: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy modern architecture and vibrant street scenes. For example, skyscrapers, illuminated bridges and bustling markets make city views more interesting to photograph than quiet countryside.

提案: 表述不礼貌且用词不准确（如“too low”“more better”）。建议用更具体的比较理由（例如多样性、文化特色或建筑风格），并避免贬低自己的国家，用连词使句子流畅。

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer more variety in architecture and cultural scenery. For instance, visiting Europe or East Asia exposed me to historical buildings and colorful streets that felt very different from the familiar landscapes at home.

× I really like take a picture of different views while I travel in different countries.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views while I travel in different countries.

问题类型 ID:8（动词 + -ing 形式）和26（句子结构错误）。动词 “like” 后面通常接动名词（-ing）或不定式，但更常见和自然的是动名词。原句使用不定式“take”不符合习惯搭配；此外“a picture of different views”应为复数“pictures”，因为是泛指多次拍摄。建议：在“like”后使用“taking”，并把“a picture”改为“pictures”。

× I always use my phone to record these different views and after many many years I will watch this picture and I can remember what things I do in different countries and.

✓ I always use my phone to record these different views, and after many years I will look at these pictures and remember what I did in different countries.

问题类型 ID:1（单复数问题）、5（过去时问题）、26（句子结构错误）。原句中“watch this picture”不自然，应该用“look at these pictures”；“picture”应为复数“pictures”；“I can remember what things I do”时态和表达不对，回忆过去的经历应使用过去时“what I did”。句尾多余“and”应删除。建议：将“watch this picture”改为“look at these pictures”，并把后半句改为“remember what I did”。

× Actually, I more prefer views in urban areas because I think urban areas have more high technology and it's more better.

✓ Actually, I prefer views in urban areas because I think urban areas have more high-tech facilities and they're better.

问题类型 ID:26（句子结构错误）、13（形容词/副词使用错误）、25（比较级使用错误）。“more prefer”是错误搭配，动词“prefer”已含比较意义，不能与“more”连用；“more high technology”表达不自然，应改为“more high-tech facilities”或“more advanced technology”；“it's more better”重复比较级，应改为“they're better”或“it's better”。建议：去掉“more”，使用“prefer”，把“more high technology”改为“more high-tech facilities”，并用“better”而不是“more better”。

× In my opinion I prefer views in other countries because in my country the view is not good for me, I think it's too low and other countries view is umm more better.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer the views in other countries because the views in my country are not good to me; I think they're too limited, and the views in other countries are better.

问题类型 ID:1（单复数问题）、25（比较级错误）、26（句子结构错误）。原句中“the view is not good for me”中“view”应为复数“views”或用“the view”但需要明确；“too low”用法不自然，可改为“too limited”或“not varied”；“other countries view is umm more better”有单复数和比较级双重错误，应为“the views in other countries are better”。建议：把“the view”改为“the views”，把“too low”改为“too limited/not varied”，并将“more better”改为“better”。