Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答总体清晰，但存在几处可以改进的地方：1) 避免重复（例如开头两句几乎相同），2) 句子语法和单复数需要注意（如 a picture / take pictures），3) 可以用更多具体细节和连接词让回答更自然和连贯。建议在回答时先给出主题句，然后用一两句具体例子或理由支撑，并用连接词（such as, for example, also）。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I travel I often photograph landscapes such as mountains and coastlines because they capture unique colours and light. I also take pictures in daily life, such as street scenes or food, to remember special moments.

提案: 回答表达了偏好但语言有些重复且结构可更紧凑：1) 避免重复“prefer rural areas”两次，2) 注意搭配和语法（“attached with different kinds of animals”不自然，应说“accompanied by wildlife”或“with various animals”），3) 加入连接词（however / whereas）和具体例子会更有说服力。

例: I prefer rural areas because the views are more varied and open, whereas cities are often dominated by tall buildings. For example, in the countryside I can see fields, rivers and wild animals, which makes the scenery more interesting and relaxing.

提案: 回答思路明确但有些口语填充词（Umm）和语法问题（which add → which adds / ocean → oceans / 'worth of' → 'worth'）影响流畅度；另一处表达“add a filter to its view”略模糊，建议改为更自然的说法，如“feel more familiar”或“feel more comfortable”。可用一两句具体例子说明为何更喜欢本国景色。

例: I prefer views in my own country because China offers a huge variety of landscapes, from mountains to rivers and oceans, that are fascinating to explore. Also, I feel more comfortable and connected to the local atmosphere, which makes those scenes more meaningful to me.

× And in daily life I like to take picture because everything I made in life is worth of recording.

✓ And in daily life I like to take pictures because everything I make in life is worth recording.

问题类型：冠词/可数名词使用错误。原句中 take picture 应为复数形式 take pictures（动作的重复性）； everything I made 应用现在时 make，因为指一般情况； worth of recording 用法不正确，正确搭配是 worth recording（不需要 of）。建议：记住可数名词单复数及固定搭配，常见固定结构为 "be worth + 动词ing"。

× But in rural areas I can see different kinds of scenery and attached with different kinds of animals, so I prefer rural areas.

✓ But in rural areas I can see different kinds of scenery and see different kinds of animals, so I prefer rural areas.

问题类型：单复数和句子结构问题。原句中 attached with different kinds of animals 用法错误，attached 通常用于被动且需与合适名词搭配，且 here 意图是“看到/有不同种类的动物”，因此应使用 see 或 be accompanied by。建议用 see different kinds of animals 或 be accompanied by different animals 来表达。

× I would like to say I prefer views in my own country because China has a large land area, there are mountains, rivers and ocean which are worthy of exploring.

✓ I would like to say I prefer views in my own country because China has a large land area; there are mountains, rivers and oceans which are worth exploring.

问题类型：现在时和名词单复数、固定短语错误。ocean 应为复数 oceans（与 mountains, rivers 并列时），worthy of exploring 的正确表达是 worth exploring。建议：并列名词保持数的一致，使用常见搭配 "be worth + -ing"。

× Umm Additionally, I'm more familiar with the atmosphere in China which add a filter to its view.

✓ Umm. Additionally, I'm more familiar with the atmosphere in China, which adds a filter to its view.

问题类型：动词形式（形容词/副词影响动词）和标点。which 后的动词应与先行词单复数一致，先行词 atmosphere 为单数，所以用 adds 而不是 add。此外句子间需要适当标点分隔。建议：注意主语单复数并相应调整动词形式，并在口语转写中用标点分开停顿。