Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and directly responds, but there are grammatical errors and some redundancy. Replace "those scenery" with "the scenery" and avoid comparing watching with phone in a way that sounds repetitive. Add one brief specific detail (what kind of views you like) and use a linking phrase to make it more coherent.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because the natural scenery looks much better in person than on a small screen. For example, I especially like photographing coastal sunsets and riversides, as the colours and reflections are hard to capture properly on a phone preview.

提案: The answer contains contradictions and grammatical issues. You say you prefer urban areas but mention mountains and breeze, which are rural features—this confuses the listener. Correct verb forms ("helps me relax and feel better") and be consistent: choose urban or rural and give specific reasons using linking words like "because" or "however."

例: I prefer rural views because I love photographing high mountains and wide landscapes; in addition, the cool breeze helps me relax and creates interesting movement in trees and grass, which makes photos more dynamic.

提案: Your response answers the question but has grammatical mistakes and slightly awkward phrasing. Use a clear topic sentence ("I prefer views in my own country") and correct articles and prepositions ("the beautiful mountains," "in Vietnam," "there"). Add a linking phrase and a specific example to support why you prefer domestic views.

例: I prefer views in my own country. For example, in Vietnam the agricultural landscapes and mountain terraces—such as those in Sapa—offer unique colours and patterns, and they also reflect local farmers' daily life, which I find fascinating to photograph.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy watching those scenery with my own eyes rather than see them in my phone.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy seeing that scenery with my own eyes rather than seeing it on my phone.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'Those scenery' is wrong because 'scenery' is uncountable and should be treated as singular ('that scenery' or simply 'scenery'). The verb forms should be parallel: 'enjoy seeing' and 'rather than seeing'. Also use 'on my phone' instead of 'in my phone'. Suggestion: use uncountable noun forms and maintain parallel structure for verbs. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the wide beautiful landscapes and I also enjoy capturing pictures of high mountains beside.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the wide, beautiful landscapes and I also enjoy capturing pictures of the high mountains nearby.

Word choice and phrase order are incorrect. 'High mountains beside' is ungrammatical; use 'the high mountains nearby' or 'nearby high mountains'. Also add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'wide, beautiful'. Ensure article 'the' before a specific noun phrase when appropriate. Suggestion: place adjectives in correct order and use 'nearby' for location. Grammar problem type ID:18

× The cool breeze out there help me relax and feeling better.

✓ The cool breeze out there helps me relax and feel better.

Subject-verb agreement and verb form errors: singular subject 'breeze' requires 'helps' (third-person singular). Also verbs should be parallel: 'helps me relax and feel better' rather than mixing 'relax' with 'feeling'. Use base form after 'helps'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and keep parallel verb structures. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Yes, I refer views in my country because Vietnam is an agricultural country and I love the view of beautiful mountain and also the wide beautiful landscapes at there.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in my country because Vietnam is an agricultural country and I love the view of the beautiful mountains and the wide, beautiful landscapes there.

Multiple errors: 'refer' is wrong word; 'prefer' fits the question. 'View of beautiful mountain' needs plural 'mountains' or 'a beautiful mountain' and needs the article 'the' for specificity. 'At there' is incorrect; use 'there'. Add commas for coordinate adjectives 'wide, beautiful'. Suggestion: choose correct verb ('prefer'), match number for nouns, and use correct adverb placement. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Besides it also reflect the Vietnamese farmers lifestyle.

✓ Besides, it also reflects the Vietnamese farmers' lifestyle.

Verb agreement and possessive punctuation issues: singular subject 'it' requires 'reflects' (third-person singular). 'farmers lifestyle' needs possessive apostrophe 'farmers'' to show the lifestyle belonging to farmers. Suggestion: use correct verb form and add possessive punctuation; include a comma after 'Besides' for flow. Grammar problem type ID:12