Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意发音与词汇准确性，避免重复填充词（如 uh, umm）。回答时先直接回应问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持观点，例如拍摄何种场景、用什么设备或拍照的目的。控制句子数量在3–4句内，使用连词使句子自然连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like landscapes and cityscapes because they capture unique atmospheres. I usually use my phone or a compact camera, and I often share my favorite shots with friends on social media.

提案: 注意词汇选择和发音（如 rural, fresher, pleasant）。回答应有主题句并用一两句具体原因支持，使用连词如 because, so, therefore 来连贯表达。可以给出具体例子说明乡村景观的优点。

例: I prefer views in rural areas because the air is much fresher and the surroundings are quieter. For example, I enjoy seeing fields and small rivers, which makes daily life feel more peaceful and relaxing.

提案: 修正词汇与句子结构问题（如 prefer, views, fresher）。先直接表明偏好，然后说明原因并给出具体对比或例子。避免不完整句子，确保信息完整且连贯。

例: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and the air is generally fresher. For instance, local mountains and coastal towns offer scenery I know well, so I feel more comfortable exploring and photographing them.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different venues, uh, especially, uh, when or go to the place in in the wasted umm, so I often show my photos.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I go to new places, so I often show my photos.

原句结构混乱，出现了不完整的从句和重复词（“when or go to the place in in the wasted”）且词汇使用不当（venues → views；wasted 无意义）。建议将想表达的意思简化为“尤其是我去新地方的时候”，主句与从句清晰衔接：使用完整从句“When I go to new places”并去掉填充词“uh/umm”。这样句子结构完整，意思明确。

× I prefer rare ears because the air is much fish Fisher and the weather is more present. Makes daily life more comfortable.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the air is much fresher and the weather is more pleasant. It makes daily life more comfortable.

原句中单词错误或拼写错误（rare ears → rural areas；fish Fisher → fresher；present → pleasant）以及句子断裂（“Makes daily life...”缺主语）。将单词改为正确形式并补全主语“It”，保证形容词和副词使用正确。建议注意拼写并使用完整句子（主语+谓语）。

× I pay for venues in my own country because my country the air in more Fisher and the. Windows.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because the air is fresher there and the scenery is beautiful.

原句结构严重混乱（“I pay for venues”显然是错误表达；“my country the air in more Fisher and the. Windows.”无意义片段）。根据上下文应为“我更喜欢自己国家的景色，因为空气更清新，风景更好”。因此把动词改为“prefer”，修正形容词“fresher”，并用“scenery is beautiful”替换无意义的‘Windows’。建议重构句子，确保主语、谓语完整并使用合适词汇。