Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子有语法和流利性问题，如动词形式、停顿和赘述。回答也较模糊，缺少具体细节或例子。建议简化句子结构，注意动词不定式与进行时的使用，减少填充词（uh, like），并给出一两个具体情境或拍照主题以增加信息量。例如说明喜欢拍什么风景、用什么设备或拍照的目的。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I go out on short trips or travel abroad. I especially like capturing landscapes and city skylines with my smartphone to remember the mood of a place.

提案: 表达有语法错误和词汇选择问题（e.g. "likely to countryside"），语句冗长且语序不够清晰。建议先用主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体原因支持，使用连接词如"because"或"so"并注意时态一致。可加入具体感受或例子来丰富回答。

例: I prefer rural views, especially open fields, because I live in a busy city and seeing wide, quiet landscapes helps me relax. For example, walking in the countryside calms me and gives me a break from the crowds.

提案: 存在词汇误用（"aboard"应为"abroad"），时态和语法不够准确，表达有重复（"different views, different side"）且情感描述笼统。建议直接表明偏好，解释原因并给出具体例子或对比，比如提到某次国外旅行中看到的新鲜景象。避免重复并使用更恰当的形容词来表达感受。

例: I prefer views in other countries because I grew up surrounded by familiar city scenes at home, so foreign landscapes feel fresher and more exciting. For instance, I loved seeing the unique architecture and coastal views during my trip to Portugal.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of uh, different views when I uh, go outside, like have a little trip or go about abroad.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views when I go outside, like when I have a little trip or go abroad.

该句中不定式结构错误。“like to taking”是错误的搭配，应使用“like doing”或“like to do”。把“like to taking pictures”改为“like taking pictures”。此外，去掉多余的填充语“uh”，并将“go about abroad”改为更自然的“go abroad”。建议：当动词like表示喜好时，可用动名词（doing）或不定式（to do），但不能混用“to + -ing”。

× I really like to take beautiful views pictures or something.

✓ I really like to take pictures of beautiful views.

原句中“beautiful views pictures”词序和冠词使用不当。英语中应使用“pictures of beautiful views”来表示“景色的照片”。建议把形容词和名词的顺序调整为常见搭配，并移除含糊的“or something”。

× I I prefer fields in rural areas because I live in a busy city so it was my daily life to see people walking around the street so it made me feel more relaxed and likely to countryside.

✓ I prefer the fields in rural areas because I live in a busy city, so seeing people walking around on the street is my daily life and going to the countryside makes me feel more relaxed.

句子中代词和指代混乱，以及时态和表达不自然。例如“it was my daily life to see people...”应改为更自然的“seeing people... is my daily life”；“likely to countryside”用词错误，应该用“going to the countryside”。建议：注意代词和动名词作主语时的一致性，使用正确动词短语（go to the countryside）。

× I think I prefer the fields aboard like other country because I grew up in my country so I was very familiar with the view of my city.

✓ I think I prefer the fields abroad in other countries because I grew up in my country, so I am very familiar with the views of my city.

原句中“aboard”误用，应为“abroad”。“like other country”应为“in other countries”。此外时态需与当前状态一致，把“was very familiar”改为“am very familiar”，并把“the view of my city”改为复数“views”或“the view”视上下文。建议：注意常见介词和副词拼写区别（abroad vs aboard），并根据语境选择单复数与时态。

× So seeing different views, different side will make me feel more exciting.

✓ So seeing different views and different sides makes me feel more excited.

原句时态和词类使用不当。“will make me feel more exciting”中“exciting”是形容事物令人兴奋，描述人的感受应使用“excited”。同时主语“seeing...”为单数动名词短语，谓语应使用“makes”而不是“will make”以符合一般陈述。建议：区分形容词“excited”(感到兴奋)与“exciting”(令人兴奋)，并注意主谓一致。