Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用简洁自然的句子直接回答问题并注意语法和时态一致性。避免重复表达（如多次说喜欢拍照），将句子分成主题句和一到两句具体细节。纠正动词形式（enjoying → enjoy / capturing）并把名词复数/单数形式改正（picture → pictures）。可以增加1个连接词以增强连贯性。

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially when I travel to new places because I can capture beautiful scenery and memorable moments. For example, last week I visited a nearby province and took many pictures of the mountains and lakes.

提案: 直接给出偏好并用一到两句具体理由支持，注意语法（enjoying → enjoy）和动词形式一致，避免重复词汇（peaceful natural environment 与 scenic landscapes 意义重复）。使用连接词（for example / moreover / also）使陈述更连贯，并提供一个具体的例子或短细节来增强说服力。

例: I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the peaceful environment and fresh air. For example, I like watching birds and walking beside waterfalls and mountains, which helps me relax and feel closer to nature.

提案: 先给出总的立场（难以选择或两者都喜欢），然后用简洁句子分别说明本国和外国景观的特点。注意语法和词形（visited → visit; connected → connect; aboard → abroad），并用连接词（however / on the other hand）分隔两部分。补充一个具体细节以增强描述性。

例: It's hard to choose because I like both. In my country the landscapes are very diverse — I often visit mountains and rivers on weekends to relax and feel connected with nature. On the other hand, I also enjoy views abroad; for example, in Denmark I loved the small colorful houses and tidy streets that looked picture-postcard perfect.

× I enjoying capture beautiful scenery and the memorable moments.

✓ I enjoy capturing beautiful scenery and memorable moments.

原句中用法错误：動詞 enjoy 應接動名詞（-ing）作賓語，且 capture 需改為動名詞 capturing 表示正在做的動作；另外定冠詞 the 在此處不必要，改為省略或用 no article（memorable moments）。建議記住常見動詞（如 enjoy、avoid、suggest）後接動名詞，不接不定式。

× I took a lot of picture of the mountains and the water for views.

✓ I took a lot of pictures of the mountains and the water for the views.

原句中 picture 應為複數 pictures，因為有很多張照片（a lot of + 可數名詞需用複數）。此外 for views 語意不自然，改為 for the views 表示為了欣賞風景。建議注意 a lot of 後跟可數/不可數名詞的單複數形式。

× I prefer rural areas because I enjoying the peaceful natural environment and fresh air.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I enjoy the peaceful natural environment and fresh air.

enjoy 後應接動名詞或原形？正確是接動名詞或用原形?（中文解释）此處應用 enjoy 的簡單現在式 enjoy，因為主語是 I，動作為習慣性事實。原句使用 enjoying（現在分詞）語法不當。建議陳述習慣或偏好時用一般現在時態（I enjoy）。

× I also love the scenic landscapes where I can watch birds flying and enjoying waterfalls and mountains.

✓ I also love the scenic landscapes where I can watch birds flying and enjoy waterfalls and mountains.

句中並列動詞需一致：watch birds flying and enjoy ...，不能把第二個動詞寫成現在分詞 enjoying。將 enjoy 改為原形以與前面的 watch 並列（或改為 enjoy ...ing 但需保持形式一致）。建議在並列動詞時保持相同的形式。

× It's hard to choose in my country the landscapes are very diverse, we have beautiful mountains and rivers that I often visited on weekend because they help me relax and connected with nature.

✓ It's hard to choose. In my country, the landscapes are very diverse. We have beautiful mountains and rivers that I often visit on weekends because they help me relax and connect with nature.

原句存在多處時態和句子結構問題：1) 過去式 visited 不合語境，描述習慣性行為應用一般現在時 visit。2) on weekend 應為 on weekends（習慣性週末）。3) connected 應為原形動詞 connect，用於 because 子句中與 help 並列用原形。4) 原句逗號拼接過多，需拆分為多句或用連詞改善。建議描述習慣時使用一般現在時，並注意副詞短語的複數形式（weekends）。

× But I also enjoy views aboard.

✓ But I also enjoy views abroad.

原句用詞拼寫錯誤：aboard 意為「在船上/在飛機上」，而 abroad 表示「在國外」，符合語境。此錯誤屬於介詞/副詞用法或拼寫混淆。建議記住 abroad 表示國外，aboard 表示在…上（交通工具）。

× For example, in Denmark I love the small colorful houses and tidy streets which feel very cozy and picture postcard perfect.

✓ For example, in Denmark I love the small, colorful houses and tidy streets which feel very cozy and picture-postcard perfect.

此句主要為標點與形容詞順序小改動，以及 picture-postcard 作複合形容詞需用連字號（picture-postcard perfect）。原句中 the small colorful houses 加逗號更自然。此錯誤接近形容詞順序/標點（可歸入定冠詞/形容詞使用），建議在多個形容詞修飾名詞時用逗號分隔，必要時複合形容詞用連字號以增強可讀性。