Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and slightly more varied in vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'take pictures' and 'record' meaning the same here) and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes and city scenes to remember places I visit. For example, last month I took several photos of a sunset over the river to capture the colours and mood.

提案: Respond directly with a clear preference sentence, then give a specific reason and a short example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'is' → 'are', 'want to close to' → 'be close to') and remove filler sounds. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' correctly.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because I live in a city and countryside scenes feel refreshing. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields and forests when I visit the countryside to capture their peaceful atmosphere.

提案: Give a direct answer first, then explain with a specific reason and an example. Fix phrasing (e.g., 'prefer to other countries' → 'prefer those in other countries') and avoid vague words like 'different scenarios'—be specific about what differences you mean.

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer sights and cultures I haven't seen before. For example, I like photographing traditional markets and architecture abroad because they look very different from what I see at home.

× Of course, I like to taking pictures of different views because I like to recording my life.

✓ Of course, I like taking pictures of different views because I like recording my life.

Using 'to' plus a verb requires the base form (infinitive) or, when using 'like' followed by a verb in general, the gerund is used. 'Like to taking' and 'like to recording' mix 'to' with gerunds, which is incorrect. Use either 'like to take' or 'like taking'; here 'like taking' and 'like recording' are natural and concise.

× I want to take a photo and record the beautiful views.

✓ I want to take photos and record beautiful views.

The original is understandable but slightly awkward given the general preference expressed. Use the plural 'photos' and 'views' to match the habitual action. This improves naturalness and agreement between verbs and nouns.

× I prefer taking views in rural areas because I live in urban areas and the views in urban areas is normal to me.

✓ I prefer taking views in rural areas because I live in urban areas and the views in urban areas are normal to me.

The subject 'the views' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are' not 'is'. This is a standard third person plural verb agreement error.

× So I want to uh looking for different views like nature.

✓ So I want to look for different views, like nature.

After 'want to' the base form of the verb is required ('look'), not the -ing form ('looking'). Also add a comma before the example phrase 'like nature' for clarity.

× I want to close to nature.

✓ I want to be close to nature.

The adjective 'close' requires a linking verb 'be' to form 'be close to'. Omitting 'be' makes the sentence ungrammatical. Use 'I want to be close to nature.'

× I think as last questions I prefer to record different views from other place, also other countries.

✓ I think, as I said in the last question, I prefer to record different views from other places, including other countries.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Add the subject 'I said' to clarify the reference to the previous question, pluralize 'place' to 'places', and use 'including other countries' for clearer expression. This fixes sentence structure and plurality.

× I would like to uh, see the different scenarios, so I prefer to other countries.

✓ I would like to see the different scenes, so I prefer other countries.

Remove the filler 'uh,' and use 'see' after 'would like to' (base form). 'Scenarios' is more often used for situations; 'scenes' or 'views' fits here. Also 'prefer to other countries' is incorrect — 'prefer other countries' is the correct form without 'to'.