Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (take pictures, hobby is photography), and add one brief supporting reason using a linking word. Limit to 2–3 sentences to avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because my hobby is photography. For example, I like capturing landscapes and cityscapes to practise composition and lighting.

提案: Clarify which you prefer (urban or rural) with one clear sentence, then give a specific reason using linking words (for example, because / so). Avoid vague phrases and social-media justifications—focus on photographic qualities. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer urban views because the architecture and lively streets offer more interesting subjects. For example, I enjoy photographing colorful markets and unique buildings since they create strong compositions and contrast.

提案: State your preference clearly and give a specific, meaningful reason (cultural familiarity, accessibility, or knowledge of locations) rather than mentioning likes on social media. Use linking words (because / therefore) and correct repetition and grammar. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best locations and cultural contexts, so I can capture more meaningful photos. For instance, being familiar with local festivals helps me plan shoots and get authentic shots.

× Yes, I like to take picture of different views because my hobbies are photography and so that I like to taking vision in different views.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views because my hobby is photography and I like to capture different scenes.

Errors: incorrect use of verb + -ing ('to taking'), singular/plural ('picture' vs 'pictures'), awkward noun phrases ('hobbies are photography', 'taking vision', 'different views'). Reason: After 'like' we can use 'to' + base verb or base verb + -ing, but not 'to' with '-ing' form. Also 'hobby' should be singular if referring to one hobby; 'capture' is a clearer verb than 'take...vision'. Suggestion: use 'like to take' or 'like taking' + plural 'pictures' and match noun number and article usage.

× Mostly I prefer the view in open media because the urban areas are used very natural and they get a lot of features in urban areas.

✓ Mostly I prefer views in open spaces because urban areas are more natural and have many features.

Errors: wrong preposition/phrase 'in open media' and awkward 'used very natural'. Reason: 'in' with 'open media' is incorrect; 'open spaces' fits context. 'Used very natural' is ungrammatical; use comparative 'more natural'. Also plural/singular consistency: 'views' and 'have many features'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'spaces' and proper comparative form.

× And when I take the PE picture in that time I get lot of like in on Instagram because mostly people like the urban area and view so that.

✓ When I take photos in those places, I get a lot of likes on Instagram because many people prefer urban views.

Errors: unclear phrase 'PE picture', incorrect articles 'a lot of like', wrong preposition 'in on Instagram', and awkward connectors 'so that'. Reason: sentence structure is fragmented and words are misused. Suggestion: simplify: 'When I take photos in those places, I get a lot of likes on Instagram because many people prefer urban views.' Use plural 'photos', 'a lot of likes', and 'on Instagram'.

× I prefer the view in my in my own country because mostly people like the own country views so that they get a lot of likes on our contribution and because some people like and lover they are our country, so that I think that I get a lot of knowledge about our entry and I usually perform good in in this and views.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because people often like domestic scenery and those posts get many likes. Also, because I love my country, I learn a lot about it and I usually do well when photographing these views.

Errors: repeated words 'in my in my', wrong prepositions and possessives ('own country views', 'on our contribution'), incorrect word choice ('lover they are our country', 'our entry', 'perform good in in this'). Reason: misuse of prepositions, pronouns and nouns creates confusion. Suggestion: use 'views in my own country', 'domestic scenery', 'get many likes', 'I love my country', 'learn a lot about it', and 'do well' instead of 'perform good'.