Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子过于重复且有语法错误，表达不够简练。回答应先直接回应问题，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。注意避免重复短语（如“I want to share”出现两次），并修正冠词和宾语搭配（share with my friends, remember the memory 不自然）。可增加具体细节如拍摄风景的类型或用处以展示词汇和内容深度。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel. I like to capture landscapes and cityscapes so I can share them with friends and remember special moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and historic buildings to remind myself of the atmosphere of a place.

提案: 回答含混且有严重语法与词汇错误（如“the view is.”不完整，“flash”/“air is flashed”用词不当）。应先给出明确观点，然后用一到两条具体理由和连接词（because, so, for example）支持，描述细节如清新空气、宁静环境、自然色彩等。注意句子完整性并用合适词汇表达感受（relaxing, fresh air, peaceful）。

例: I prefer rural views because the countryside is more relaxing and peaceful. For example, the fresh air and open fields help me unwind, and I enjoy photographing natural scenes like rivers and hills rather than busy streets.

提案: 内容表达不清且有多处错误（如‘wheels’应为 ‘views’, 时态和语法错误）。首先明确回答，再解释原因并给出具体例子或比较方法。如果没有出国经验，可说明愿望或计划并用正确的时态（I have never travelled abroad; I would like to）。尽量避免冗长或不完整句子，使用连接词（because, so that, for example）。

例: I would prefer to see views in other countries because they offer different landscapes and cultures. Although I have never travelled abroad, I want to visit places like European cities or tropical islands to compare architecture, food scenes and natural scenery.

× Of course, I love to take in a lot of pictures when I travel.

✓ Of course, I love taking a lot of pictures when I travel.

句中動詞愛好作為習慣性動作，應使用動名詞（verb + -ing）作為愛好（love）後的賓語。原句使用不自然的 take in，且多餘介詞 in。建議將 love to take in a lot of pictures 改為 love taking a lot of pictures 或 love to take a lot of pictures；若想更自然，使用 taking。

× I want to share my I want to share the special views to my friend and I want to remember this memory.

✓ I want to share the special views with my friends and remember these memories.

原句重複且結構混亂：有重複的片段“My I want to share”，且 share 的搭配應為 share something with someone（用 with，不用 to）；memory 可數且複數更符合語境。建議合併句子，去掉重複，使用 with 及複數形式。

× I think it is very meaningful.

✓ I think it is very meaningful.

此句語法正確，無需修改。保留原句。

× I prefer the countryside view.

✓ I prefer the countryside views.

如果指一般的鄉村景色應使用複數或不可數名詞“countryside”不需加 view。原句用單數 view 顯得不自然。建議改為 I prefer the countryside (or I prefer countryside views) 以表達偏好整體的鄉村景色。

× Countryside can make me feel relaxed and the view is.

✓ The countryside makes me feel relaxed and the views are peaceful.

原句缺乏完整謂語結構且結尾不完整“the view is.” 沒有接續形容詞。建議改為 The countryside makes me feel relaxed（使用第三人稱單數謂語）並補全第二分句如 the views are peaceful。注意主謂一致與完整描述。

× I think the view is more beautiful because the flash is because the air is flashed.

✓ I think the views are more beautiful because the air is fresh.

原句出現單字錯用：flash 和 flashed 與語境不符，應為形容空氣品質的形容詞 fresh。還要注意主語複數 views 與動詞一致。建議將句子改為 the views are more beautiful because the air is fresh。

× I prefer wheels in other countries.

✓ I prefer to travel in other countries.

原句 wheels（車輪）與語境不符，疑為拼寫或用詞錯誤。應表達“我更喜歡在其他國家”看風景，使用不定式表達偏好 to travel 或直接說 I prefer visiting other countries。修正為 I prefer to travel in other countries。

× I have never been travel overseas.

✓ I have never traveled overseas.

現在完成時需要過去分詞形式：have + 過去分詞。原句使用 been travel 結構錯誤；若用 been，應為 have never been overseas（省略 travel）。建議使用 I have never traveled overseas 或 I have never been overseas。

× I want to watch different views in other countries and it can so I can compare different views.

✓ I want to see different views in other countries so I can compare them.

原句結構冗長且有語序及連接詞錯誤（and it can so I can… 不合語法）。英語中常用 see 或 visit 而非 watch 用於景色；比較時用代詞 them 代替前文的 views，避免重複。建議改為 I want to see different views in other countries so I can compare them。