Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, natural answer and add a brief supporting detail. Use correct grammar and a clear phrase instead of "in a like view." Mention what kinds of views you enjoy and why. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences) and use a linking word if you add a reason.

例: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing landscapes and city skylines because they capture interesting light and shapes, so I often go out at sunrise or sunset to get the best shots.

提案: Avoid replying with uncertainty. Choose one option, state it clearly, and give a specific reason or example. Use a linking word (for example, because/so) to connect your reason. Keep it short (1–2 sentences).

例: I prefer rural views because I like wide open spaces and natural scenery, and I find it easier to take peaceful landscape photos there.

提案: Answer directly and compare the two choices if you need to. Use clear comparative language (e.g., "I prefer... because..., although..."). Give a specific example of a view from each place to make the answer concrete. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

例: I enjoy views both at home and abroad, but I prefer views in other countries because I love discovering unfamiliar architecture and landscapes; for example, I enjoyed the coastal cliffs in Portugal, while at home I like the quiet mountain valleys.

× Yes, I like taking pictures in a like view.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of beautiful views.

The original sentence uses incorrect prepositions and odd word order. 'Taking pictures of' is the correct collocation; 'in a like view' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'of' and a suitable adjective 'beautiful' or 'interesting' to describe 'views'. Suggestion: Use 'take pictures of' + noun phrase and choose an appropriate adjective.

× I don't know.

✓ I don't have a strong preference.

While 'I don't know' is grammatically correct, it is vague in this context. The examiner asked which type of views the student prefers; a clearer reply is 'I don't have a strong preference.' This fixes sentence purpose and provides a more natural response. Suggestion: Use a fuller sentence that directly answers the question.

× Yes, I like another country and my country's best. Like a view.

✓ Yes, I like views in other countries and in my country, but I prefer the views in my country.

The original contains incorrect preposition and possessive usage ('another country' and 'my country's best' are unclear) and fragmented phrasing. Use 'views in other countries' and 'views in my country' for clarity, and 'I prefer' to express preference. Also combine fragments into a complete sentence. Suggestion: Use parallel structures 'views in other countries and in my country' and a clear comparative verb like 'prefer'.