Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use correct tense and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors like ‘liked pictured’.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset because the light makes the buildings look dramatic, and I sometimes take close-up shots of plants to capture textures.

提案: Give a direct answer (urban or rural) and explain why with specific reasons and a linking word. Replace vague words like ‘other’.

例: I prefer rural views because the countryside is peaceful and full of natural scenery, and I can photograph open fields and small villages which feel more relaxing than busy streets.

提案: Give a clear statement and support it with specific reasons and correct grammar. Avoid ungrammatical phrases like ‘mine countries’ and unsupported superlatives. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and unspoiled, and I know the best spots to visit, so I can take more meaningful photographs.

× Yes, I liked pictured different views.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of different views.

The student used past tense 'liked' and incorrect verb form 'pictured.' The question asks a general preference in present tense, so use present tense 'like.' Use the verb phrase 'to take pictures' or the gerund 'taking pictures' to express the activity. Suggestion: say 'I like taking pictures of different views' or 'I like to take pictures of different views.'

× I like other areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

The question asked for a preference between urban or rural areas. 'I like other areas' is vague and uses 'other' incorrectly without a clear comparison. A clear response is 'I prefer rural areas' or 'I like rural areas.' Use the specific noun rather than 'other.'

× Mine countries because it's best pure in world.

✓ I prefer other countries because they are the most pure in the world.

The student used 'Mine countries' incorrectly; possessive pronoun 'mine' cannot modify 'countries.' Also sentence has subject-verb agreement and article errors: 'it's' (it is) refers to singular but 'countries' is plural. 'best pure' is incorrect adjective order and comparison; use superlative 'most pure' and include the definite article 'the world.' Suggested clear sentence: 'I prefer other countries because they are the most pure in the world.'