Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 语法和表达大致清晰，内容直接回答了问题并提供了理由，但有少量词汇和语法错误（如冠词缺失、句子可更简洁自然），信息可以更具体（例如拍什么类型的景色、用什么设备）。建议注意冠词用法，简化句子结构，并加入一两处具体细节以丰富答案。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes, especially when I travel. It helps me remember the places I visit, and I usually share the best shots with my friends online. I particularly like capturing landscapes and street scenes with my smartphone because they remind me of the atmosphere of each trip.

提案: 回答表达了偏好，但存在多处词汇和语法错误（如“expense list”，“left up”用法不当）且描述含糊不具体。建议使用正确短语（e.g. “city skyline at night”），加上连接词并给出具体原因或例子来支持观点。句子不应过长或不连贯。

例: I prefer urban views because I love the city skyline at night. When the buildings are lit up, the scene looks modern and exciting, and I enjoy photographing the contrast between bright lights and dark sky.

提案: 答案意图是表达对本国景色的偏爱，但有严重词汇和语法错误（例如“wheels”，“secrets held battles”），句子不通顺且信息混乱。建议先用一句清晰的主题句直接回答，再用一两句具体原因（例如文化熟悉感、历史意义或自然风光），并修正时态与单复数。

例: I prefer views in my own country because I'm more familiar with its culture and history. The landscapes and historic sites make me feel proud, and there are still many beautiful places I haven't visited yet, so I want to explore them in the future.

× I think it's fun hobby.

✓ I think it's a fun hobby.

缺少冠词“a”，形容词“fun”修饰名词“hobby”时需用不定冠词。建议在可数单数名词前根据上下文加上适当的冠词（a/an或the）。

× I really like looking at the city skyline expense list at nights when all the buildings are left up.

✓ I really like looking at the city skyline at night when all the buildings are lit up.

原句中“expense list”与语境不符，疑为错误词；应该使用介词短语“at night”表示夜间。动词短语应为“lit up”（被灯光照亮），用过去分词作状态描述。建议注意固定搭配和常用短语的使用。

× It feels very lovely and modern to me.

✓ It feels very lovely and modern to me.

句子语法正确，无需改动。这里是陈述现在感受，使用一般现在时恰当。仅作为确认，不做修改。

× I prefer the wheels in my own country.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country.

原句中“wheels”与上下文（views）不匹配，属于句子结构/词汇选择错误。应使用与问题相关的名词“views”。建议在答题时复核关键词是否与问题一致。

× I know the secrets held battles and it makes me feel comfortable and proud.

✓ I know the history and stories behind them, and it makes me feel comfortable and proud.

原句“the secrets held battles”结构混乱、词序错误且用词不当。根据语境，应表达“我知道它们背后的历史和故事”。建议用清晰的名词短语（history and stories）并用连词连接子句。

× They are still many beautiful place.

✓ There are still many beautiful places.

可数名词“place”在表示多个时应使用复数“places”；同时句子缺少存在句结构“there are”。建议注意单复数一致并使用正确的存在结构。

× I haven't visit yet so I want to explore more.

✓ I haven't visited them yet, so I want to explore more.

完成时态中应使用过去分词“visited”而不是动词原形“visit”。另外补充宾语“them”以指代前文的“places”，并在逗号后连词“so”连接两个分句。建议复习现在完成时的构成（have/has + 过去分词）和代词指代一致性。