Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 表达应更自然、语法更准确，并增加连接词和具体细节。例如修正动词形式、使用冠词、并说明你为什么喜欢拍摄（情感或用途）。保持句子不超过5句。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes, especially food and landscapes. I find photography helps me remember special moments, and I often edit and organize the best shots. Moreover, it’s a convenient way to share my experiences with family through messaging apps.

提案: 回答要更具体并使用连接词，加强原因和举例的逻辑。避免模糊词语（like ... and so on），可加入感受或对比。

例: I prefer urban views because the city offers a mix of modern architecture and green spaces. For example, I enjoy photographing lively shopping streets and well-designed parks, which provide diverse subjects and interesting contrasts.

提案: 提高语法准确性并提供更具体的细节或例子，使用连接词来组织句子。说明你想体验哪些文化方面或具体景点。

例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy exploring different cultures and architectural styles. For instance, I’d love to photograph traditional markets and famous landmarks abroad to capture how people live and what makes each place unique.

× Yes, I like take pictures of different views such as foods and sceneries.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views such as food and scenery.

动词后接动名词：在英语中，动词 like 后应使用动名词 taking 而不是不带-ing 的不定式。此外，foods 和 sceneries 是错误的可数复数用法，food 和 scenery 在此处作不可数名词更自然。建议记住常见结构：like + verb-ing；以及某些表示总体概念的名词用不可数形式（food, scenery）。

× I think it is a good way to recount and it's convenient way to share these photos to my family members.

✓ I think it is a good way to record memories, and it's a convenient way to share these photos with my family members.

原句中 have 两处问题：1) recount 用法不当，recount 多指叙述、讲述，若指记录回忆应使用 record 或 record memories；2) 缺少冠词 a before convenient way；3) 介词使用错误，应用 share ... with 而不是 share ... to。建议使用固定搭配：a convenient way / share ... with。

× I prefer views in urban areas because the scenery is charming and there are different buildings like shopping malls, parks and so on.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because the scenery is charming and there are different buildings, such as shopping malls and parks.

原句中 like 用法可接受但在列举示例时更正式的连接词是 such as；另外 and so on 在口语可用，但书面或正式回答中可删去以保持简洁。还需要在 buildings 后加逗号以分隔列举项。建议使用 such as 来举例，并避免不必要的 and so on。

× I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different countries culture and I want to know other countries famous attractions.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I want to experience different countries' cultures and I want to know other countries' famous attractions.

原句缺少属格标记：当要表示“其他国家的文化/景点”时，应使用所有格 's 或者 后置 of 结构。这里要在 countries 后加所有格撇号 (countries')，并将 culture 和 attractions 采用复数形式以匹配 different/famous 的语义。建议使用 countries' cultures / countries' famous attractions 或者 the cultures of other countries。