Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且相关，但可以更直接先给主题句，然后用更具体的细节和连词丰富回答，避免过多重复（如“help me remember places”与后句略有重叠）。建议在回答中加入具体例子（某次旅行或某种景色的细节）并使用连接词如“for example”或“in particular”来增强连贯性。

例: Yes — I love photographing different views. When I travel I usually take landscape and cityscape shots to capture the unique atmosphere and color palette; for example, in Kyoto I photographed temple gardens at sunrise to record the soft light and reflections on the ponds.

提案: 回答明确但有少许语言不自然（如“St. lights”应为“street lights”），句子可更紧凑并加入连接词使逻辑更顺畅。建议用一两处具体细节（例如夜景中特定建筑或灯光效果）来支持观点，并注意词汇准确性。

例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the city skyline, especially at night when street lights and illuminated skyscrapers create a vibrant scene; for instance, I like photographing the waterfront at dusk when reflections double the lights.

提案: 回答情感真挚，但存在小语法问题（如“landscapes makes”应为“landscapes make”）且可以用更具体的回忆或对比来加强内容。建议在主题句后用连接词（e.g. “because”/“for example”）补充一两个具体记忆或地点，以增加说服力。

例: I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of my childhood; for example, the rice terraces near my hometown bring back memories of family picnics and festival parades, so I feel both comfortable and proud.

× I enjoy taking photos when I travel because they help me remember places I've visited.

✓ I enjoy taking photos when I travel because they help me remember the places I've visited.

句中缺少定冠词“the”。在指代说话者曾去过的特定地方时应使用定冠词“the”。建议：在“places”前加“the”，表示特定的已访问地点。

× I prefer views in urban areas because I love my city skyline, especially at night when buildings and St. lights create a lively atmosphere.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I love my city's skyline, especially at night when buildings and street lights create a lively atmosphere.

原句中“my city skyline”需要所有格形式“my city's skyline”来表示“我所在城市的天际线”。“St. lights”是不正确或缩写错误，应写为“street lights”。建议：使用所有格并将缩写展开为“street lights”。

× Although I enjoy visiting foreign countries, familiar landscapes makes me feel comfortable and proud.

✓ Although I enjoy visiting foreign countries, familiar landscapes make me feel comfortable and proud.

主语“familiar landscapes”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”而不是单数“makes”。建议：确保主语为复数时使用动词原形（或复数形式），即“make”。