Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更自然、语法正确并更具体。避免冗长或重复，使用一到两句主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意时态和动词形式（如“taking” 改为 “take” 或 “I also take pictures of landscapes…”），并用连接词如“also”或“for example”组织信息。

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different scenes because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, I often take pictures of landscapes, people and animals when I travel, and I feel satisfied when I capture a moment that shows a unique perspective.

提案: 回答不清晰且有语法和用词错误，需要直接说明偏好并给出具体理由或描述。使用清晰的主题句并补充一到两条具体理由或比较（例如安静、自然景观、空气）。避免不相关或难以理解的句子。

例: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more peaceful than cities. For instance, in the countryside there are wide fields and fresh air, so I can relax and take better landscape photos.

提案: 回答表达意图可以理解但语法和表达需要改进。应直接陈述偏好并给出具体理由，使用正确动词（如 “satisfy” 而非 “submit”）和词序。可以举例说明你想看到的具体不同之处（例如建筑风格、文化特色）。

例: I prefer views in other countries because they satisfy my curiosity about different cultures and architecture. For example, I enjoy seeing historic buildings and street scenes abroad because they are often very different from those in my hometown.

× I also taking picture about landscape, people and animals.

✓ I also take pictures of landscapes, people, and animals.

句中动词使用不正确。原句用的是现在进行式（taking）但意图表达一般事实或经常性动作，应使用一般现在时的动词形式 take，并将名词复数化（pictures, landscapes）。另外介词应为 of 而不是 about，列举项之间用逗号分隔并在最后一项前加 and。建议多练习一般现在时的陈述句和动词的 -ing 与基形的区别。

× Every time I take good picture of them I think I have a good view of the world.

✓ Every time I take a good picture of them, I think I have a good view of the world.

名词与冠词搭配错误。原句中 picture 是可数名词，前面需要不定冠词 a。缺少逗号导致句子更难理解。建议复习可数名词单数时需用 a/an 的规则。

× Literally, I prefer countryside and I think it's Kim dates back to earlier everyone's life. I can draw some different about my.

✓ I prefer the countryside because I think it goes back to earlier ways of life. I can see some differences in my drawings.

原句结构混乱，存在无意义词（Kim）和不完整短语。需要重组句子以准确表达意思。第一个句子将 prefer 与名词连用时常用 the countryside；解释原因时用 goes back to earlier ways of life 更通顺。第二句原意不明，猜测想表达“我可以画出一些不同（的东西）”，改为 I can see some differences in my drawings 更清楚。建议先用简单句表达一个完整想法，避免插入无关单词。

× I prefer the views in other countries because I think it can submit my curiosity about how the other country build their.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because I think they can satisfy my curiosity about how other countries are built.

时态和代词使用不当。原句用 it 指代复数的 views，应改为 they；动词 submit 用错，正确动词为 satisfy（满足好奇心）。此外 how the other country build their 语法错误，改为 how other countries are built 或 how other countries are constructed。建议练习主谓一致和常用动词搭配，并注意国家、views 等为复数时代词和动词的一致。