Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 발음과 문법 오류를 바로잡고 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예: 'I like take pictures' → 'I like taking pictures'와 같이 동명사 사용을 고치고, 'nature abuse'와 같은 단어 선택 오류를 피하세요. 또한 중복 표현(‘I love I love’)을 줄이고, 연결어구(so, because, especially)를 사용해 이유를 명확히 설명하세요. 구체적인 디테일을 추가하면 좋습니다(예: 어떤 풍경을 좋아하는지, 카메라로 무엇을 포착하려 하는지).

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing natural landscapes because they are so varied and beautiful, and I often try to capture interesting light or textures.

提案: 간단한 주제문은 좋았지만 문법과 연결 표현을 개선해야 합니다. 주어-동사 일치와 복수/단수 사용을 확인하세요('They're full'이 무엇을 가리키는지 불분명). 이유와 구체적 예시를 한두 문장으로 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요. 또한 연결어(if, because, so)를 사용해 문장의 흐름을 자연스럽게 하세요.

例: I prefer rural areas because I love the peaceful atmosphere of the countryside. For example, the quiet roads and open fields make it easy to relax and enjoy nature.

提案: 전반적으로 명확한 이유 제시와 논리 전개가 잘 되어 있습니다. 다만 반복 표현('different, different')을 피하고 시제·조동사 사용을 정확히 하세요('let me see' → 'allows me to see' 혹은 'lets me see'). 추가로 구체적인 예시(어떤 풍경이나 문화 요소가 다른지)를 넣으면 더 설득력 있는 답변이 됩니다.

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often feel more novel compared to what I'm used to at home. For instance, I enjoyed the dramatic coastlines in Portugal and the unique architectural styles in Japan, which showed me landscapes and cultures I hadn't seen before.

× Yes, I like take pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when describing general preferences. Use 'taking' instead of the base form 'take'. Suggestion: practice common verb patterns (e.g., like + -ing, enjoy + -ing).

× Umm I love I love nature abuse.

✓ Umm I love nature.

The phrase 'nature abuse' is incorrect and likely a repetition/word choice error; it also repeats 'I love'. Remove the repetition and the incorrect noun. Suggestion: keep sentences concise: 'I love nature.'

× Nature abuse because nature bills are very spread and very beautiful.

✓ I like it because natural landscapes are very spread out and very beautiful.

Multiple issues: 'nature abuse' and 'nature bills' are incorrect word choices. 'Spread' as an adjective is incorrect; use 'spread out' to describe extent. Rephrase for clarity: 'natural landscapes are very spread out and very beautiful.' Suggestion: use correct nouns (landscapes) and adjective phrases ('spread out').

× I love countryside life.

✓ I love the countryside lifestyle.

'Countryside life' is understandable but awkward. Use 'the countryside' or 'the countryside lifestyle' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: prefer established noun phrases: 'the countryside' or 'rural life.'

× And countryside life is so cozy.

✓ And the countryside lifestyle is so cozy.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'countryside life' makes it sound unnatural. Also 'countryside lifestyle' is more natural. Suggestion: include articles where needed: 'the countryside' or 'the countryside lifestyle.'

× They're full.

✓ It's full of life.

Pronoun 'They' is unclear and doesn't agree with singular noun 'countryside life' or 'the countryside.' Use 'It' for 'the countryside' and a clearer complement: 'full of life.' Suggestion: ensure pronoun refers clearly to the noun and matches in number.

× I prefer views in other countries because they often feel more novel and different, different than the scenery at home.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because they often feel more novel and different than the scenery at home.

Redundant repetition of 'different' should be removed. Tense 'prefer' is correct. Suggestion: avoid repeating words; edit for conciseness.

× My own country is very familiar to me, so traveling abroad let me see different landscapes and cultures.

✓ My own country is very familiar to me, so traveling abroad lets me see different landscapes and cultures.

Subject-verb agreement: after 'traveling abroad' as a noun phrase the verb should be 'lets' (third person singular) not 'let.' Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects: use 'lets' here.