Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct short answer but then add a brief reason and an example to sound natural and informative. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas. Keep it under five sentences.

例: No, I don't usually take pictures of views because I prefer enjoying the moment. However, when I travel with friends, I sometimes take a few photos to share with them or to remember the place.

提案: The question asks for a preference, so you should state which you prefer and explain why with a specific detail or comparison. Use a linking word like "because" or "however." Keep responses concise and relevant.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because I enjoy open landscapes and quiet scenery. In contrast, urban views can be busy and noisy, so they feel less relaxing to me.

提案: Answer the preference question directly (own country or other countries) and give a reason with a specific detail or example. Use linking words such as "because" or "for example." Keep it natural and short.

例: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultural sights and architecture that I haven't seen before. For example, I loved the coastline in Portugal when I visited last year because it looked very different from home.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of different views.

The student's short answer 'No, I don't.' is grammatically acceptable in casual speech, but it is ambiguous because the verb is omitted; the question asks about liking taking pictures, so the complete response should repeat the verb phrase for clarity and to match the question's structure. Suggestion: include the verb phrase from the question (I don't like taking pictures of different views) to avoid ambiguity and ensure full, grammatical responses.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't prefer views in urban areas; I prefer rural ones.

The short reply 'No, I don't.' lacks the referenced verb and object; the question asks whether the student prefers urban or rural views, so a clear answer must state what is not preferred and what is preferred. Suggestion: state the full verb phrase and provide the alternative (I don't prefer views in urban areas; I prefer rural ones) to make the meaning explicit and grammatically complete.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't prefer views in my own country; I prefer views in other countries.

Again the ellipted 'No, I don't.' omits the verb and object, creating ambiguity. The question contrasts preferences between own country and other countries, so the student should respond in full: 'I don't prefer views in my own country; I prefer views in other countries.' Suggestion: repeat the relevant verb phrase and include the contrasting preference to form a complete, grammatical sentence.